Ninja vs samurai
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the samurai is strong.
Beacause they wear armor, sword and guns.
They are start training at 4years old.
They are little smart.
If samurai and ninja are fight samurai is winner.
강사 첨삭
Hello Layla! I think that samurais will win too. They have weapons, and ninjas don\'t. Great work on this composition. Keep it up!
- Teacher Ivy :)
I think the samurai is strong.
>> Correct
Beacause they wear armor, sword and guns.
>> Because they wear armor, swords and guns.
They are start training at 4years old.
>> They start training at 4 years old.
They are little smart.
>> They are little smart.
If samurai and ninja are fight samurai is winner.
>> If samurais and ninjas have a fight, samurais will win.
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