Ninth homework
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Oh! so much interesting topic!
I am happy only to think about it.
There are four my bucket lists for me.
The first thing I want to do is mastering speaking in English.
I do want to speak fluently in English and I have dreamed this for 5 years.
After then, I'd like to teach an elementary school students conversation in English.
The second thing is getting my home in seoul.
I want to live happily my family there for a long time.
To do this, I have to earn hard money.
The third is to go eating tour.
I love eating so much that I got stomach sick many times but I don't give up eating.
I'm going to travel to eat food that is famous the area all my country.
My final bucket list is driving super car.
With a car window open and in the wind, I'd like to run a wide road.
It's so amazing!
But in fact. I don't have driver's licence however I will get it to drive someday.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
Wow! You sure have great things on your bucket list. These things are actually doable so I wish you luck with everything and hope that you\'ll be able to do everything very soon!
~T. Lynn
Oh! so much interesting topic!
>> correct!
I am happy only to think about it.
>> I\'m happy just thinking about it.
There are four my bucket lists for me.
>> There are four in my bucket list.
The first thing I want to do is mastering speaking in English.
>> correct!
I do want to speak fluently in English and I have dreamed this for 5 years.
>> correct!
After then, I\'d like to teach an elementary school students conversation in English.
>> After that, I\'d like to teach elementary school students English conversation.
The second thing is getting my home in Seoul.
>> correct!
OR>> the second thing is to own a house/an apartment in Seoul.
I want to live happily my family there for a long time.
>> I want to live happily with my family there for a long time.
To do this, I have to earn hard money.
>> To do this, I have to work hard to earn enough money.
The third is to go eating tour.
>> The third is to go on an eating/food tour.
I love eating so much that I got stomach sick many times but I don\'t give up eating.
>> correct!
I\'m going to travel to eat food that is famous the area all my country.
>> I\'m going to travel to eat food which are famous in each region in our country.
My final bucket list is driving super car.
>> Finally, I\'d like to drive a super car.
With a car window open and in the wind, I\'d like to run a wide road.
>> With the car windows open, I could feel the wind while driving on an open road.
It\'s so amazing!
>> That would be so amazing!
But in fact. I don\'t have driver\'s license however I will get it to drive someday.
>> But the thing is I don\'t have a driver\'s license yet. However, I will get it someday so that I\'ll be able to fulfill my wish on my bucket list.
Wow! You sure have great things on your bucket list. These things are actually doable so I wish you luck with everything and hope that you\'ll be able to do everything very soon!
~T. Lynn
Oh! so much interesting topic!
>> correct!
I am happy only to think about it.
>> I\'m happy just thinking about it.
There are four my bucket lists for me.
>> There are four in my bucket list.
The first thing I want to do is mastering speaking in English.
>> correct!
I do want to speak fluently in English and I have dreamed this for 5 years.
>> correct!
After then, I\'d like to teach an elementary school students conversation in English.
>> After that, I\'d like to teach elementary school students English conversation.
The second thing is getting my home in Seoul.
>> correct!
OR>> the second thing is to own a house/an apartment in Seoul.
I want to live happily my family there for a long time.
>> I want to live happily with my family there for a long time.
To do this, I have to earn hard money.
>> To do this, I have to work hard to earn enough money.
The third is to go eating tour.
>> The third is to go on an eating/food tour.
I love eating so much that I got stomach sick many times but I don\'t give up eating.
>> correct!
I\'m going to travel to eat food that is famous the area all my country.
>> I\'m going to travel to eat food which are famous in each region in our country.
My final bucket list is driving super car.
>> Finally, I\'d like to drive a super car.
With a car window open and in the wind, I\'d like to run a wide road.
>> With the car windows open, I could feel the wind while driving on an open road.
It\'s so amazing!
>> That would be so amazing!
But in fact. I don\'t have driver\'s license however I will get it to drive someday.
>> But the thing is I don\'t have a driver\'s license yet. However, I will get it someday so that I\'ll be able to fulfill my wish on my bucket list.
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