No diet;(kkkkk

2014-02-05 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

학생이 쓴 원문

Actually I don't set any particular plans for my diet yet. Please tell me if you know any good diet plans. And it's quite depressing to write about the diet, so I'd like to write about other things. I hope it's okay. Today I made two paper dolls of Olaf, a snowman of the disney movie Frozen. The reason why I made these is that I will put those in each bouquet for my relatives' graduation. (I appreciate your recommendation but I realized that we don't have many pictures that we took together.) In fact, when I met them last week, I could see that they were really into the movie. They listened and sang the movie's OST. I hope they like my present. Have you seen the movie? I also like the music of the movie. They are really good. Sorry for not writing about a diet. See you tomorrow Kristel;)

강사 첨삭

Hello there sweetie!! :) Don\'t worry about not writing about it. The important thing  is you wrote something to express some of your thoughts in English. :) In addition, don\'t be burdened so much whether they would like your present or not because you know, people appreciate anything that comes from the heart! :) As they say, it\'s the thought that counts not the price nor the size of the present! Smile now. ^^ See you later~~ T.Kristel- Actually I don\'t set any particular plans for my diet yet. >> Actually, I haven\'t set any particular plans for my diet yet.Please tell me if you know any good diet plans. >> CORRECT!! And it\'s quite depressing to write about the diet, so I\'d like to write about other things. >> And it\'s quite depressing to write about dieting, so I\'d like to write about other things.I hope it\'s okay. >> CORRECT!! (Of course, it is! :) Happy thoughts are better than depressing ones. kkk) Today I made two paper dolls of Olaf, a snowman of the disney movie Frozen. >> Today I made two paper dolls of Olaf, the snowman from the disney movie Frozen. The reason why I made these is that I will put those in each bouquet for my relatives\' graduation. >> CORRECT!! (I appreciate your recommendation but I realized that we don\'t have many pictures that we took together.) >> CORRECT!! In fact, when I met them last week, I could see that they were really into the movie. >> CORRECT!! They listened and sang the movie\'s OST. I hope they like my present.>> CORRECT!! CORRECT!! Have you seen the movie? >> CORRECT!! I also like the music of the movie. They are really good.>> CORRECT!! CORRECT!! Sorry for not writing about a diet. >> Sorry for not writing about my diet. See you tomorrow Kristel;) >> CORRECT!!

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