NO I don\'t agree that the age is just a number
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some people say that but I definitely say there is something that older guys can not do and apply
and plus I think all of people have to act like being their age
let you image that a oldest man wear a tear jean and colorful shirt, that is showed up really wired to another people
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Hi Sir [이름]!^^
I totally agree to your opinion that we should act according to our age.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts again.
Always,
~Kelly^^
some people say that but I definitely say there is something that older guys can not do and apply>> Some people say that. But, I can definitely say that there is something that older guys cannot do anymore because of their age.
and plus I think all of people have to act like being their age
and plus I think all of people have to act like being their age
>> Plus, I think all people should act according to their age.
let you image that a oldest man wear a tear jean and colorful shirt, that is showed up really wired to another people
let you image that a oldest man wear a tear jean and colorful shirt, that is showed up really wired to another people
>> It is weird for other people to imagine a very old man wearing ripped jeans and a colorful shirt.
>> For other people, it is weird to see a very old man wearing ripped jeans and a colorful shirt.
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