No I don\'t believe in magic.
학생이 쓴 원문
Magic is just a trick. For example, the magic of a \"magician to match the other person\'s card\" is to select a card that is not mixed except for the card that the other person chooses. Like this, the magic is just a trick, but that\'s right. The magic is interesting. I\'d never seen a magic, but I saw for a youtube, there are a lot of magic. Tn the case of \"disassemble the body magic\" is there are another area. I love magic, also I bought magic supplies and tried them myself, but that was not easy. Then I know \"magic is very difficult thing\", it is not easy things to do.
강사 첨삭
Hi Maria!
Truly, performing a magic trick requires precision and exact coordination with a team or accurate actions by the one who performs it.
If you practice well, you can do it.
Thanks for this essay, see you in class!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Like this, the magic is just a trick, but that\'s right. The magic is interesting.
>> Here, magic is just a trick, but that\'s right- magic is interesting.
I\'d never seen a magic, but I saw for a youtube, there are a lot of magic. Tn the case of \"disassemble the body magic\" is there are another area.
>> I\'ve never seen magic, but I saw on Youtube that there are a lot of magic. In the case of \"disassembling the body magic\", there are other areas.
I love magic, also I bought magic supplies and tried them myself, but that was not easy.
>> Correct!
Then I know \"magic is very difficult thing\", it is not easy things to do.
>> Then I knew that \"magic is very difficult thing\", it is not an easy thing to do.
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