No, I don\'t like cats.
학생이 쓴 원문
No, I don\'t like cats.
There\'s a lot of cats in my university. One day, I walked around university alone, and I listened to the scared sound.
It was the sound of a cat, but it was like a baby crying.
Actually, baby crying isn\'t scared. However, hearing it at night made me feel scared.
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Hi Kara!^^
There\'s a lot of cats in my university.
It was the sound of a cat, but it was like a baby crying.
Actually, baby crying isn\'t scared.
I do not like cats.
There are a lot of stray cats in our country.
There was a time when a cat went into our house.
The cat suddenly stole the fish on our table. hahaha
Andrea
No, I don\'t like cats.
>> Correct
There\'s a lot of cats in my university.
>> There are a lot of cats in my university.
One day, I walked around university alone, and I listened to the scared sound.
>> One day, I walked around the university alone and heard a scary sound.
It was the sound of a cat, but it was like a baby crying.
>> It was the sound of a cat that sounded like a crying baby.
Actually, baby crying isn\'t scared.
>> Actually, a crying baby isn\'t scary.
However, hearing it at night made me feel scared.
>> However, hearing it at night made me feel scared.
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