No, I don\'t think so.
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No, I don\'t think so.
>>CORRECT
It is a strange idea that movies, the Internet, and video games cause young people
to commit crimes.
>>CORRECT
OR>>It seems
strange to think that movies, the Internet, and video games cause young people
to commit crimes.
Because I think people who commit crimes end up committing themselves in some
way.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I believe
that individuals who commit crimes often end up harming themselves in some way.
Of course, criminals these days are often sympathetic to movies, games, the
Internet, etc., giving them any role or feeling very miserable about their
current situation and committing crimes.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Certainly,
these days, criminals often find solace in movies, games, the Internet, etc.
They assign these media various roles, feeling miserable about their current
situation, which can lead to committing crimes.
Even if it\'s not necessarily the Internet, movies, games, they seem to have
chosen movies, internet, games as a catalyst for justification at any time.
>>Even if it\'s not specifically the Internet, movies, or games, individuals often choose these mediums as a catalyst for justification at any time.
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