No, I don\'t think there is not related with a happiness and rich
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I think that is matter of mindset
How much someone would be happy is that how much she/he have a positive mindset in their mind
and what to be a rich man is not important
The very important thing is how they were to be rich.
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Hello, [이름]. Thank you once again for making time to do your homework despite your busy schedule. I appreciate it. Positivity is truly a good thing and it has a good effect on people\'s lives. I hope you have a good evening. ~Teacher Jane
No, I don\\\'t think there is not related with a happiness and rich
>> No, I do not think there is a relation/ connection between happiness and wealth.
I think that is matter of mindset
>> I think that is a matter of the mind.
How much someone would be happy is that how much she/he have a positive mindset in their mind
>> How happy someone would depend on how positive their mindset is.
and what to be a rich man is not important
>> And being rich is not important.
The very important thing is how they were to be rich.
>> The more important thing is the manner they get rich.
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