No, I don\'t want to be firefighter.
학생이 쓴 원문
No, I don\'t want to be firefighter. Because I\'m scared of fire.
However, I respect firefighter that always save people in the fire.
Thanks to them, I\'m living my life safely.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kara!
However, I respect firefighter that always save people in the fire.
Thanks to them, I\'m living my life safely.
Being a firefighter is not easy.
It needs bravery and courage.
Since I am weak, I cannot be a firefighter.
Andrea
No, I don\'t want to be firefighter. Because I\'m scared of fire.
>> No, I don\'t want to be a firefighter because I\'m scared of fire.
However, I respect firefighter that always save people in the fire.
>> However, I respect a firefighter who saves people from fire.
Thanks to them, I\'m living my life safely.
>> Correct
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