No, I don\'t want to visit Savanna
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I love traveling. I want to go Europe, Asia, North America, and I want to go South America too! But! I don\'t want to go where a lot of animals are living, or Desert like a Sahara. Savanna is a Desert, also it is a green field. If I go there, I think the smell will be really bad, because there are a lot of animals. These is why I don\'t want to visit Savanna.
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Hi there Maria!
It is true that the Savanna could be totally be harsh yet there is also beauty that lies in it.
Perhaps, it would be nice to go there for some scientific purpose.
Thanks a lot for doing your homework Maria!
See you tomorrow.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
But! I don\'t want to go where a lot of animals are living, or Desert like a Sahara.
>> But! I don\'t want to go where a lot of animals are living, or to the desert like the Sahara.
Savanna is a Desert, also it is a green field.
>> Correct!
Or: Savanna is a desert. Also, it is a green field.
If I go there, I think the smell will be really bad, because there are a lot of animals.
>> Correct!
These is why I don\'t want to visit Savanna.
>> These are why I don\'t want to visit the Savanna.
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