No. I think my parents are good to understand my mind.
학생이 쓴 원문
It is wrong to characterise it as a generation gap.
Our family is only four members.
And I have a many relatives.
I have lived in Kwangju since I was born.
I bought a camera on online.
Thanks for reading.
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강사 첨삭
Hi! This is a good composition. There are just some few errors that you need to review. Practice more on writing some compositions. It is a good way to practice your writ8ing skills. Thank you!
No. I think my parents are good to understand my mind.
>>No. I think my parents are too good to understand me.
It is wrong to characterise it as a generation gap.
>>It is wrong to characterize it as a generation gap.
Our family is only four members.
>>Our family have only four members.
And I have a many relatives.
>>Correct
I have lived in Kwangju since I was born.
>>Correct
I bought a camera on online.
>>I bought a camera online.
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