No internet or no cell phone?

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People all over the world have their computer and cell phone.

>> People all over the world have their own computers and cell phones.

Some people have one desktop and a notebook computer.

>> correct!

All computer can connect with internet.

>> All computers can connect to the internet.

People can order a food, book a airplane seat, make a financial payment from the internet.

>> People can order  food, book an airplane ticket, and pay bills online.

Nowadays, cell phone can be replace all function of computer.

>> Nowadays, cell phones can replace all the functions of a computer. 

And then, which do the cell phone or internet choose?

>> And so which should I choose, cell phone or internet?

I think the choice is out of imagination. It can\'t choose.

>> I think the choice is out of my/the imagination. I can\'t choose.

OR>> I can\'t think which should I choose.

OR>> Which is the right choice? I don\'t know.

It already dominated all over the world.

>> It already dominated the world.

The whole world of people can not be avoided.

>> You cannot avoid people all over the world.

Almost everybody\'s hands in the world holding a cell phone.

>> Almost everybody\'s hands are holding a cell phone.

Can we really imagine our lives without the internet or cell phone?

>> correct!

I think it can\'t imagine.

>> I think it\'s unimaginable.