No, it has not changed, I guess.
학생이 쓴 원문
The tourism is not changed as always do in time.
Taking a travel is a somehow a burden depending on a pesonal situations.
I don't like to travel.
But from time to time , when I need a deep rest, it somehow proficient to my life.
When we go to the resort, the price is much higher than normal. This fact describes the exhaustion which is generated in going there or in having been living working hard.
Am I right?
I hope you agree with me.
Thanks for reading.
강사 첨삭
Good evening Mr. [이름],
Thanks for doing your homework.
- Blair
Taking a travel is a somehow a burden depending on a pesonal situations.
I don\'t like to travel.
But from time to time , when I need a deep rest, it somehow proficient to my life.
When we go to the resort, the price is much higher than normal. This fact describes the exhaustion which is generated in going there or in having been living working hard.
Am I right?
I hope you agree with me.
Thanks for reading.
In my own opinion, the Tourism have not changed as time went through.
For me, travels are somehow a burden, depending on each personal\'s opinion.
I don\'t like to travel that much.
But from time to time, when I need a deep rest, it is somehow proficient to my life.
One reason is that, when we go to resorts, the costs are much higher than normal.
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