No kids
학생이 쓴 원문
No kids couple is increasing in Korea.
Maybe it is a kind of general phenomenons of world.
It is natural adoptees decline in the view of social perception.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Ms. [이름]!
The concept of a family is now changing. In the past, the goal of every married couple is to have kids but these days like what you have mentioned that couple just prefer not having kids.
But what about your thought?
See you later.
Aki~
No kids couple is increasing in Korea.>>> Couples who do not want to have kids are increasing in Korea.
Maybe it is a kind of general phenomenon of world.
Maybe it is a kind of general phenomenon of world.
>>> Maybe it is a kind of general phenomenon in the world.
>>> Maybe it became a global phenomenon
It is natural adoptees decline in the view of social perception.
It is natural adoptees decline in the view of social perception.
>>> It is natural then that adoptees has decline in the view of social percetion.
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