No mill, no meal.

2009-12-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jennifer

학생이 쓴 원문

I designed and planned with a concept, "No mill, no meal." As I know, the proverb means that there is no use without a final important work or a process in any situation. Is it correct? And also I explained my design with it's meaning as following a paragraph. No mill, no meal. After being lost a function of inner harbor facilities, the city just has residence, business district, office and cultural area without interconnection each other. I plan and design creative environment through flow of nature, people and business, as a result, the city will become exciting and energetic water front urban area. is it's logic correct or did I misunderstand the saying? Please check the vocabulary and grammar in this writing. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

[이름], Here are the corrections. I am not 100% sure that I got the message because it was a bit technical. If you have any feedbacks, don뭪 hesitate to tell me in class tomorrow. Thank you so much! Xoxo, Jenny   I designed and planned with a concept, "No mill, No meal." >> I designed and planned a concept named, 밡o mill, No meal.

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