no pain no gain
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1. What do you do when your social battery is low?
>> I drink alone at home watching my favorite tv program\'s rerun and eat ramen or something delicious. The reason why this situation gives me happiness is colaboration with my favorite things. I really like drinking with delicious food. The point is not drinking but drinking with delicious food. And I don\'t want to meet with a check by my family. During this time, It should be alone. My favorite program is \"Infinite chanllenge\" which is broadcast for 12 years and ended in 2018. I am sure that There was / will be no program which is more fun than \"Infinite chanllenge\". I binge-watching this program three times ever. At last, my favorite food is ramen. So this colaboration excites me. But to meet a condition that isn\'t met with a check, I should eat these after 0 AM. Threfore, instead they give me big happiness, they also give bigger Calorie. I\'m so sad.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Brian!
That sounds like such a relaxing and enjoyable way to unwind. Cheers to finding happiness in the little things!
~ Teacher Maxine
>> I drink alone at home, watching my favorite TV program\'s rerun and eat ramen or something delicious.
The reason why this situation gives me happiness is colaboration with my favorite things.
>> The reason why this situation gives me happiness is collaboration with my favorite things.
I really like drinking with delicious food.
>> CORRECT
The point is not drinking but drinking with delicious food.
>> CORRECT
And I don\'t want to meet with a check by my family.
>> And I don\'t want to be checked on by my family.
During this time, It should be alone.
>> During this time, I should be alone.
My favorite program is \"Infinite chanllenge\" which is broadcast for 12 years and ended in 2018.
>> My favorite program is \"Infinite Challenge,\" which was broadcast for 12 years and ended in 2018.
I am sure that There was / will be no program which is more fun than \"Infinite chanllenge\".
>> I am sure that there was no program which was more fun than \"Infinite Challenge.\"
I binge-watching this program three times ever.
>> I have binge-watched this program three times.
At last, my favorite food is ramen.
>> Lastly, my favorite food is ramen.
So this colaboration excites me. But to meet a condition that isn\'t met with a check, I should eat these after 0 AM.
>> So this collaboration excites me. But to meet a condition that isn\'t met with a check, I should eat these after midnight.
Threfore, instead they give me big happiness, they also give bigger Calorie. I\'m so sad.
>> Therefore, instead of just giving me happiness, they also give me more calories. I\'m so sad.
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