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학생이 쓴 원문
While last 2 weeks..I felt down. but..thesedays i feel great.
I tried to remeber positive things.
Sometimes..I forgot many things.
I think, everyday I missed a lot of things that i have to thank.
I can thank for giving me a new day.
I can thank for giving me food ..
I can thank for my family, friends, my job place..
Thanks are all around, but I didn't realize about them.
So, I decide to thank for everything..
I think tommorrw is much better than today!:)
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for your composition. Yes, I agree with you, there are a lot of things that we should be thankful of especially in our daily lives. We should be grateful to what we have, our family, friends, and work.
While last 2 weeks..I felt down. but..thesedays i feel great.
>>For the last 2 weeks, I felt down. But these days I feel great.
>>For the past 2 weeks, I felt down. But these days I feel great.I tried to remeber positive things.
>>I tried to remember positive things. OR
>>I tried to think of positive things.Sometimes..I forgot many things.
>>CORRECTI think, everyday I missed a lot of things that i have to thank.
>>I think, I missed to thank a lot of things everyday.I can thank for giving me a new day.
>>CORRECT I can thank for giving me food.
>>CORRECTI can thank for my family, friends, my job place.
>>I can thank for my family, friends, and my job place.Thanks are all around, but I didn\'t realize about them.
>>CORRECTSo, I decide to thank for everything.
>>So, I decided to thank for everything.I think tommorrw is much better than today!:)
>>CORRECT
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