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2012-02-23 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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While last 2 weeks..I felt down. but..thesedays i feel great. I tried to remeber positive things. Sometimes..I forgot many things. I think, everyday I missed a lot of things that i have to thank. I can thank for giving me a new day. I can thank for giving me food .. I can thank for my family, friends, my job place.. Thanks are all around, but I didn't realize about them. So, I decide to thank for everything.. I think tommorrw is much better than today!:)

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for your composition. Yes, I agree with you, there are a lot of things that we should be thankful of especially in our daily lives. We should be grateful to what we have, our family, friends, and work.   While last 2 weeks..I felt down. but..thesedays i feel great. >>For the last 2 weeks, I felt down. But these days I feel great. >>For the past 2 weeks, I felt down. But these days I feel great.I tried to remeber positive things. >>I tried to remember positive things. OR >>I tried to think of positive things.Sometimes..I forgot many things. >>CORRECTI think, everyday I missed a lot of things that i have to thank. >>I think, I missed to thank a lot of things everyday.I can thank for giving me a new day. >>CORRECT              I can thank for giving me food. >>CORRECTI can thank for my family, friends, my job place. >>I can thank for my family, friends, and my job place.Thanks are all around, but I didn\'t realize about them. >>CORRECTSo, I decide to thank for everything. >>So, I decided to thank for everything.I think tommorrw is much better than today!:) >>CORRECT

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