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Hello again [이름]!

Happy Thursday. ^^

Thanks for sharing your opinions about plastic surgery.
I totally agree with you.
Growing old naturally is better.
The attitude of a person is more important than looks.

Have a great night.
Teacher Nina

In these days, Having plastic surgery is common phenomenon.

>> In these days, having plastic surgery is a common phenomenon.
Desire for having better appearance is very strong, so many plastic surgery have opened since 2000.

>> The desire to have a better appearance is very strong, so many plastic surgery clinics have opened since 2000.

For twelve years, many people including men got surgery, so their appearance is becoming similiar. 

>> correct ( spelling check: similar ^^)
Their are saying that In Gangnam you can find many women who have exactly sameface(because they got a surgery at the same place)

>> They are saying that in Gangnam, you can find many women who have exactly the same face. ( it is because they had their plastic surgery at the same place.
I think media propell this, many Tv program give spot light to pretty entertainer, and make us think that good appearance is the first priority.

>> I think media propel this, many TV programs give a spotlight to pretty entertainers and make us think that good appearance is the top priority,
In this trend, many plastic surgery hospital compete with their cost.

>> With this kind trend, many plastic surgery hospitals compete in terms of the cost.
they lower the cost of surgery to attract many people. 

>> correct 

Actually there are many side effect even lead to death.

>> Actually, there are many side effects that even leads to death.
but many doctors ignore it to make more money.

>> correct 
To make matter worse, when side effect comes, doctors do not have any responsibility. 

>> To make matter worse, when side effect happens, doctors do not have any responsibility.

>> OR: To make the situation worse, when side effects happen, doctors don\'t mind.
Of course there are people who have to get plactic surgery in medical purpose.

>> Of course, there are people who need to have plastic surgery because of medical purposes.

but I think it is better to get older naturally

>> correct