NOT BAD.┏√守───━

2014-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

학생이 쓴 원문

Today is not bad. My favorite compurter game's name is LOL. It is very famous game. But i can't this game. My friend play this game. I like this game but i'm not play this gmae often. .┏√守───━.┏√守───━.┏√守───━.┏√守───━

강사 첨삭

I am sorry to hear from you that you cannot play your favorite game often. But it is just okay because too much time in playing computer games is unhealthy. Instead, you just have to study hard and do your homework. Doing these things make you better student and even the best student. So, you have to do the things that you first need to do more than anything else. Have a lovely night Mike. -Teacher Chloe Today is not bad. >>Correct! >>Today is good. >>It is good today.My favorite compurter game\'s name is LOL. >>The name of my favorite computer game is \"LOL\".It is very famous game. >>It is a very famous game.But i can\'t this game. >>But I cannot play it this time. My friend play this game. >>My friend plays it too. I like this game but i\'m not play this gmae often..┏√守───━.┏√守───━.┏√守───━.┏√守───━ >>I like it but I cannot play it often. >>I like the game but I cannot play it often.

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