NOT GOOD

2014-01-24 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

학생이 쓴 원문

I play with my friend. I played with my friend yesterday. I went to a stream. It was frozen. I walked with my friend, when i fall out. I GET DUMP my leg. It was feel BAD. I WILL NOT go there.

강사 첨삭

Oh no Mike! You have to take an extra care next time. Be careful! Think of your safety whenever you go out okay? Anyway, have an interesting weekend dear. Have some fun! Laught out loud because you deserve it.  (Hahaha) Good night! -Teacher Chloe I play with my friend. >>I played with my friend. I played with my friend yesterday. >>Correct! >>Yesterday, I played with my friend.I went to a stream. >>I went to the stream. It was frozen. >>Correct! I walked with my friend, when i fall out. >>I walked with my friend then I fell down. I GET DUMP my leg. >>I hurt my legs. It was feel BAD. >>I really felt bad. I WILL NOT go there. >>I will not go there again next time.  

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