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2017-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

학생이 쓴 원문

not to open toay I am sorry to call you so early but I have some bad news. School gym administration called to me last late night and inform that we can not open the badminton gym because of the earthquake happened last Tuesday. He said that we have to check a safty of all facility in school. So you can not come to school for 3 days. So I am calling you to let you stay your home. Oh thank you. by the way Is there other place we can join badminton in the early morning? I want to play it right now because I practiced a power smash shot last night in from of a mirror in my house.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Hooray for Friday!^^

My golden day!
Have you planned your activities for today and over the weekend?
Or do you just want to take a rest at home?^^
You may do anything you want, as long as it makes you fulfilled in the end :)

Let\'s see each other on Monday!

~T. Eunice


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>> [Do you mean: The badminton gym is not open today.]
I am sorry to call you so early but I have some bad news.
>> Correct!
School gym administration called to me last late night and inform that we can not open the badminton gym because of the earthquake happened last Tuesday.

>> The school gym administration called me last late night to inform us that we can not open the badminton gym because of the earthquake happened last Tuesday.
 He said that we have to check a safty of all facility in school. So you can not come to school for 3 days.
>>  He said that we have to check the safeness of all the facilities in school so you can not come to school for 3 days.
So I am calling you to let you stay your home.
>> I am calling you to let you know that you must stay at home.
Oh thank you. by the way Is there other place we can join badminton in the early morning?

>> Thank you, by the way is there other places where we can play badminton in the early morning?
 I want to play it right now because I practiced a power smash shot last night in from of a mirror in my house.

>>  I want to play right now because I practiced the power smash shot in front of the mirror in my house last night.

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