not yet finish^^

2011-04-28 · 첨삭 강사 Dominic

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hi dominic i think it is my first time to write during our period. at first i used to write essays when i had free time but now i think i am lazieror busier than before. now in this time, i am working in the academy and it is the last time to teach today. i think you wonder how i can write this during the class.actually my students are taking the exam and i am just looking at them. and i have a smart phone. that's why i can write it^^ to write an essay with a phone is difficult and so annoying. but i have a reason to do that now . Oh the class is over. so i will last my essay few minutes later^^

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [Name], Yeah this is your first composition and thanks for dropping it in this composition. I appreciate it a lot. Hope your students get a high score. -T.Dominic-   hi dominic i think it is my first time to write during our period. >>Hi Dominic, >>I think it's my first time to write to during our period. at first i used to write essays when i had free time but now i think i am lazieror busier than before. >>I used to write essays when I had free time but now I think I am lazier or busier compared before. now in this time, i am working in the academy and it is the last time to teach today. >>This time, I am working in the academy and it's my last class for today. i think you wonder how i can write this during the class. >>Maybe you are wondering how I can write this during the class. actually my students are taking the exam and i am just looking at them. and i have a smart phone. that's why i can write it^^ >>Actually my students are taking the exam and I am just looking at them and my smart phone, that's why I can write.   to write an essay with a phone is difficult and so annoying. >>To write an essay using a phone is difficult and so annoying.  but i have a reason to do that now . >>But I have a reason to do it now. Oh the class is over. >>CORRECT so i will last my essay few minutes later^^ >>So I will finish my essay after a few minutes ^^[is this what you mean?]

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