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학생이 쓴 원문
I went to academy.
It was not bad.
I went to the market with my mom.
My mom likes shopping.
My mom bought so much thing.
It was not bad too.
So today was so so
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강사 첨삭
You did not have a so-so day Mike but a great day.
Oh, yes you are right!
Women really loves shopping.
Wow!
So, I think you have a lot of food again to eat on the weekend. (Hahaha!)
Enjoy your weekend then!
Have some fun little boy!
I will miss you!
-Teacher Chloe
I went to academy.
>>Correct! It was not bad.
>>Correct! I went to the market with my mom.
>>Correct!
>>I went to the market with my mother. My mom likes shopping.
>>Correct!
>>My mother likes shopping.My mom bought so much thing.
>>My mom bought many things. It was not bad too.
>>Correct! So today was so so>>So, today was so-so.
GoOdByE
>>Goodbye!
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