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I did nothing today. Really nothing. Actually, I think didn't even studied. I only studied some chinese words amd went to math academy. However, I read books very much about korea's history. It's very interesting to me because one of my favorite subject is history. I read How did Joseon Dynasty had built and how did Joseon Dynasty collapsed. Joseon Dynasty was made by Tae - Jo( king name ) who is Lee - Seong- Gae ( real name ). He made Joseon by not obeying the Ko- reo ( which is also called Korea ) king. He commited an act of treason. He killed the highest person related to war and be king by himself. I didn't read the last part how it collapsed, I will tell you later.
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Hello Joey,
That was interesting stuff. Let me know if you learn more about that story. Take care!
-RJ-
I did nothing today. Really nothing.
>>I did nothing today, absolutely nothing.
Actually, I think didn't even studied.
>>Actually, I think didn't even study.
I only studied some chinese words amd went to math academy.
>>correct
However, I read books very much about korea's history.
>>However, I read a lot of books about Korea's history.
It's very interesting to me because one of my favorite subject is history.
>>It's very interesting to me because one of my favorite subjects is history.
I read How did Joseon Dynasty had built and how did Joseon Dynasty collapsed.
>>I read how Joseon Dynasty was built and how it collapsed.
Joseon Dynasty was made by Tae - Jo( king name ) who is Lee - Seong- Gae ( real name ).
>>Joseon Dynasty was founded by Tae - Jo( king name ) who is Lee - Seong- Gae ( real name ).
He made Joseon by not obeying the Ko- reo ( which is also called Korea ) king.
>>He created Joseon by not obeying the Ko- reo ( which is also called Korea ) king
He commited an act of treason.
>>correct
He killed the highest person related to war and be king by himself.
>>He killed the war commander and became the king.
I didn't read the last part how it collapsed, I will tell you later.
>>correct
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