Nothing is more romantic than chocolate
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There is nothing in the world that has not changed ever except the fact that all of thing is changed.
>>>Nothing in the world has changed, but the fact that everything changes.
Loving itself is furious, agitated, not calm down.
>>>Love itself is furious and agitated, and does not calm down.
Loving anybody is good, necessary for our life, but love itself can not lasting forever, so we consider one important thing
lasted especially between the man and wife. What is this? That is companionship.
>>>We think of one important thing because it is necessary in our lives to love someone, but love itself cannot last forever.
Maintaining especially between a man and his wife. What\'s this? It\'s companionship.
Had it not been in companionship, the love affair between man and wife come to boring and tedious, finally lead to fail.
>>>If you hadn\'t dated, the affection between a couple would be boring and boring, eventually leading to failure.
Because life composed of not only loving affair but also everlasting productive conversation between lovers.
>>>Because life consisted not only of affection, but of eternal productive conversation between lovers.
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