Nothing Special

Today, i had nothing special in school. I just played badminton with my friends Also, there was a fight between friends. They actually didn't fight with their body but they used verbal violence. One cried so the one who made him cry had a great punishment.

Hi Kevin^^ Great thing that you wrote a composition tonight. Good thing that you weren't involve in the fight, stay as a good boy^^. School leaves us fun memories each day. Treasure each day you have, one day you'll have to get back on them to have a good smile. Check out my corrections on the sentences you wrote. T' Joan   Today, i had nothing special in school. >>Today, there was nothing special in school. I just played badminton with my friends >>I just played badminton with my friends.Also, there was a fight between friends. >>There was also a fight between my friends. They actually didn't fight with their body but they used verbal violence. >>CORRECT! One cried so the one who made him cry had a great punishment. >>One cried, so the one who made him cry received a great punishment. >>One cried so the one who made him cry was greatly punished.