nothing special

2011-09-28 · 첨삭 강사 Joan

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there was nothing special in school today. Also, the time schedule of today was really boring. We didn't have a change of teachers. we have a change of teachers in class of Art, music, english and practical courses, Anyway, today was boring. The topic on school that we did today was also boring too! But tomorrow we have lots of teacher exchange so tomorrow will be fun than other today.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kevin^^ Another ordinary day for you? Guess you're getting used with your routine. I'd like to make a suggestion for you to make it special, count the moments that aren't the same with the past days. Learn to appreciate little things like receiving or giving out smiles. I also want you to keep a journal of your daily routine so you'd notice what changes take place or what new things you discover each day. Take one step at a time! Read on the following corrections^^ T'Joan   there was nothing special in school today. >>There was nothing special in school today. Also, the time schedule of today was really boring. >>My schedule today was really boring, too.We didn't have a change of teachers. >>CORRECT! OR >> The teachers haven't changed.we have a change of teachers in class of Art, music, english and practical courses, Anyway, today was boring. >>We have a change of teachers in some of our classes like Art, Music, English and practical courses. Anyway, today was boring. The topic on school that we did today was also boring too! >>The topic at school that we did today was also boring!But tomorrow we have lots of teacher exchange so tomorrow will be fun than other today. >>But tomorrow, we have lots of new teachers so tomorrow will be funner than other days.

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