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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
I forget one thing that I should give you an information.
I will go to business tirp on next week.(Germany/Munich)
So, I've postponed my course today. And I can start it again from Apr. 1st.
Enjoy your time and see you in loverly Apr. 2014.
Best Regards,
[이름]
강사 첨삭
A pleasant afternoon to you, CK!
This certainly slipped your mind a while back.
Oh CK, how forgetful you have become!
Nonetheless, thanks for notifying me through the composition board.
It\'s nice to receive a message from you again.
Well, this is the second. This is so cool!
Can you count the correct marks below? Here\'s my honest opinion: If you will continuously practice your writing skills, you will definitely earn more.
CK, do enjoy your trip! I will talk to you then in April 2014, which you described as \"lovely\".
By then, you will know what you would want to clone of given the chance to do so.
Until then, CK!
_Klein
P.S.
Do not forget to buy something for your wonderful children and gorgeous wife upon your return.
Dear [Name],>>CorrectI forget one thing that I should give you an information.
>>I forgot to inform you about one thing.I will go to business tirp on next week.(Germany/Munich)>>I will go on a business trip in Munich, Germany next week.So, I\'ve postponed my course today. And I can start it again from Apr. 1st.
>>Correct
OR >> So, I\'ve postponed my course today where I can resume with it on April 1st.Enjoy your time and see you in loverly Apr. 2014.>>Correct! [ lovely ]Best Regards,CK
>>Correct!
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