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2019-12-16 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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Hi, Fiona Long time no see :) How\'s it going? Could you see this notice? If you throw away the pollen, electronics, frame, etc. Please let us know. Please understand that the waste disposal cost will be charged. Note that personal items will be disposed of even when storing them. (or Note that personal times would be disposed if you left yours here without any notice.) This is to inform you that pivot point is not responsible for any damage or loss. Thank you for always cooperating.

강사 첨삭

Wow, it\'s you Ms. [Name] [이름] :)

I\'m glad you are back^^

I\'m excited to hear what happened to you.

Speak to you later. ^^


Hi, Fiona

>>Hi Fiona! (correct punctuation)
Long time no see :)

>>Long time no see. :) (correct punctuation)
How\'s it going?

>>CORRECT!
Could you see this notice?

>>CORRECT!

OR: Can you please check this notice?


If you throw away the pollen, electronics, frame, etc.
Please let us know.
>>If you throw away the pollen, electronics, frame, etc., please let us know.
Please understand that the waste disposal cost will be charged.
>>Please understand that waste disposal costs will be charged.
Note that personal items will be disposed of even when storing them.
>>Note that personal items are also discarded when stored.
(or Note that personal times would be disposed if you left yours here without any notice.)
OR: Please note that personal items will be discarded if left here without notice.
This is to inform you that pivot point is not responsible for any damage or loss.
>>CORRECT!
Thank you for always cooperating.
>>CORRECT

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