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2011-12-01 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

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This question is from my freetalking topic. 1)How old were you when you had your first date? I think when i was fourteen with one girl who was classmate in my elementary school. She confessed to me. i agreed on it going out with her. I can't remember about what we did something. But If she come to me again. i can treat better than the old days. 2) Did you ever go on a blind date? No.I haven't tried it yet, but i hope and pursue. Many Koreans try it to get married. one of them my brother included go on a blind date. He has a good job in Korea But i heared from my mother. He always failed on blind dates. i don't know that's why he falied it. I hope next year to get married with a nice woman. That's why I don't want to get married Nowadays. 3)What was the longest amount of time you ever dated someone? I think a year. that was sophomore in university. I met freshman at Christian club. It was weird that We didn't talk about going out with us.However We went out with.

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Hello [이름]. Don't worry you will find her soon! Just pray God will help you find her. Kk^^ -Tiny^0^ This question is from my freetalking topic. >>CORRECT1)How old were you when you had your first date? >>CORRECTI think when i was fourteen with one girl who was classmate in my elementary school. >> I think when I was fourteen with one girl who was my classmate in my elementary school. She confessed to me. >>CORRECT i agreed on it going out with her. >> I agreed on going out with her. I can\'t remember about what we did something. >> I can\'t remember about what we did. But If she come to me again. i can treat better than the old days. >> But If she come to me again, I can treat her better than the old days. 2) Did you ever go on a blind date? >>CORRECTNo.I haven\'t tried it yet, but i hope and pursue. >>CORRECTMany Koreans try it to get married. >>CORRECT one of them my brother included go on a blind date. >> One of them is my brother who goes on a blind date. He has a good job in Korea But i heared from my mother. He always failed on blind dates >>SPELLING CHECK: heard >> He has a good job in Korea. But I heard from my mother, he always fail on blind dates. i don\'t know that\'s why he falied it. >> I don\'t know why he fails it. I hope next year to get marred with a nice woman. >>CORRECTThat\'s why I don\'t want to get married Nowadays. >>CORRECT3)What was the longest amount of time you ever dated someone? >>CORRECTI think a year. that was sophomore in university. >> I think a year. I was sophomore in university. I met freshman at Christian club. >>CORRECTIt was weird that We didn\'t talk about going out with us. However We went out with. >> It was weird that we didn\'t talk about going out together. However we still went out.

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