Nov.01.2011.
학생이 쓴 원문
This question is from my freetalking topic.
1)How old were you when you had your first date?
I think when i was fourteen with one girl who was classmate in my elementary school.
She confessed to me. i agreed on it going out with her.
I can't remember about what we did something.
But If she come to me again. i can treat better than the old days.
2) Did you ever go on a blind date?
No.I haven't tried it yet, but i hope and pursue.
Many Koreans try it to get married. one of them my brother included go on a blind date.
He has a good job in Korea But i heared from my mother.
He always failed on blind dates. i don't know that's why he falied it.
I hope next year to get married with a nice woman.
That's why I don't want to get married Nowadays.
3)What was the longest amount of time you ever dated someone?
I think a year. that was sophomore in university.
I met freshman at Christian club.
It was weird that We didn't talk about going out with us.However We went out with.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름].
Don't worry you will find her soon!
Just pray God will help you find her. Kk^^
-Tiny^0^
This question is from my freetalking topic.
>>CORRECT1)How old were you when you had your first date?
>>CORRECTI think when i was fourteen with one girl who was classmate in my elementary school.
>> I think when I was fourteen with one girl who was my classmate in my elementary school.
She confessed to me.
>>CORRECT
i agreed on it going out with her.
>> I agreed on going out with her.
I can\'t remember about what we did something.
>> I can\'t remember about what we did.
But If she come to me again. i can treat better than the old days.
>> But If she come to me again, I can treat her better than the old days.
2) Did you ever go on a blind date?
>>CORRECTNo.I haven\'t tried it yet, but i hope and pursue.
>>CORRECTMany Koreans try it to get married.
>>CORRECT
one of them my brother included go on a blind date.
>> One of them is my brother who goes on a blind date.
He has a good job in Korea But i heared from my mother. He always failed on blind dates
>>SPELLING CHECK: heard
>> He has a good job in Korea. But I heard from my mother, he always fail on blind dates.
i don\'t know that\'s why he falied it.
>> I don\'t know why he fails it.
I hope next year to get marred with a nice woman.
>>CORRECTThat\'s why I don\'t want to get married Nowadays.
>>CORRECT3)What was the longest amount of time you ever dated someone?
>>CORRECTI think a year. that was sophomore in university.
>> I think a year. I was sophomore in university.
I met freshman at Christian club.
>>CORRECTIt was weird that We didn\'t talk about going out with us. However We went out with.
>> It was weird that we didn\'t talk about going out together. However we still went out.
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