NOV.04.2011.
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I often watch Gag programs on Tv.
I read some information on the internet.
I think it's a some sad story.
There saying " Prejudice"
Suddenly i'm wondering about philippines.
And i was looking for filipino's attitude and personality.
Teacher have also some other nation's bias.
But i can sure about Korea on objective point of view.
(I hate something on subjective point of view.)
Korea is not risk.
But The weakness of Korean have many envy to succeed, and very diligent.
Most of people are living zealous.
If i lived other nation, i also have bias.
That true, we can't be helped.
Anyway, it's friday.Thank god it's friday.do you have religion?
I dont have religion at the moment.
Most of Filipino, what do they serve God?
My father said, he went Philippin for a year ago on summer vacation.
Mostly The Catholic Church. is that right?
I think its quickly killing time. Korea's Saying.
The time is Gold. we can't return at the memont.
So,We alwyas live the best.
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Hi [이름]!!! I agree with you that time is very essential in our lives so we don\'t need to waste each moment of it. Being a Filipino, just like Koreans, Filipinos don\'t like to waste their time doing nothing. So I guess Asian people have their owns ways of spending every hour of their waking day. See yah!!!
I often watch Gag programs on Tv.
>> Correct I read some information on the internet.
>> Correct I think it\'s a some sad story.
>> Somehow, I think it\'s a sad story.There saying \" Prejudice\">> They\'re saying about \'prejudice\'.Suddenly i\'m wondering about philippines.
>> Suddenly I wonder about the Philippines.And i was looking for filipino\'s attitude and personality.
>> And I was looking for some information about Filipino attitude and personality.Teacher have also some other nation\'s bias.
>> Teachers also have some bias to other nations.But i can sure about Korea on objective point of view.
>> But I\'m sure about Korea\'s objective pont of view.(I hate something on subjective point of view.)>> I hate the idea about subjective point of view.Korea is not risk.
>> Korea is not at risk.But The weakness of Korean have many envy to succeed, and very diligent.
>> But the weaknesses of Koreans are being envious to succeed and too diligent.Most of people are living zealous.>> Most people are living in a zealous life.If i lived other nation, i also have bias.
>> I I live in a different nation, I will also be biased.That true, we can\'t be helped.>> It\'s true, we can\'t he rescued.Anyway, it\'s friday.Thank god it\'s friday.do you have religion?>> Anyway, it\'s Friday. Thank God it\'s Friday. Do you have a religion?I dont have religion at the moment.>> I don\'t have a religion at the moment.Most of Filipino, what do they serve God?>> Fr most Filipinos, what is their reason that they serve God?My father said, he went Philippin for a year ago on summer vacation.
>> My father said, he went to the Philippines a year ago for a sumer vacation.Mostly The Catholic Church. is that right?>> You most have Catholic churches there, right?I think its quickly killing time. Korea\'s Saying.
>> I think it\'s quickly killing the time, according to Korea\'s saying.The time is Gold. we can\'t return at the memont.
>> Time is gold. We can\'t return back time.So,We alwyas live the best.
>> So we should always live the best we can
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