NOV.08.2011.
학생이 쓴 원문
I have some suggestions.
I don't have a good speaking skill and pronunciation.
I think.
These are serious problems to speak.
so If First i had read Today newspaper.
Could you correct what i read.
It's intensive pronunciations.
I wish.
I'd like to have a good speaking skill.
Could you help me get it.
I'm thinking whether to quit or not about english academy.
The reason why i went there.
Actually, I spoke the time not enough.
so. I'll look for other academy and other class.
I feel so good to talk with you.
I think
If it was role or rule during working.
I hope you to get your wish.
And I'm sorry when you called.
I definitely didn't wake up. see you later.
I heard that your city is very cold.
And The crimate it's frequently changed.
Anyway. always take care of your health.
I think go to The Philippines.
To studay.
But i haven't decided yet.
I'm Just thinking about that.
I try to consider The issue more.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!! Thank you so much that you always feel good while talking with me. I feel the same way too. Well [이름], I also think that in order for you to develop your speaking and pronunciation better you really need to spend more time studying the English language. If you have any suggestion that you think I might be a help just let me know. Take care also and talk to you soon then.
I have some suggestions.>> Correct I don\'t have a good speaking skill and pronunciation.>> Correct I think. These are serious problems to speak.>> I think these are some serios problems in speaking.so If First i had read Today newspaper. Could you correct what i read.
>> So if I will read an article from a newspaper today, could you correct they way I read it?It\'s intensive pronunciations.>> It\'s an intensive pronunciation exercise.I wish.I\'d like to have a good speaking skill.>> I wish I could have a good speaking skill.Could you help me get it.>> Could you help me get/achieve it?I\'m thinking whether to quit or not about english academy.
>> I\'m thinking whether to quit or not from the English academy.The reason why i went there.
>> The reason why I went there. (Don\'t forget to capitalize the pronoun \"I\")Actually, I spoke the time not enough.
>> Actually, the time is not enough to have a conversation.so. I\'ll look for other academy and other class.>> SoI\'ll look for other academy and other class.I feel so good to talk with you.
>> Correct I think If it was role or rule during working.
>> I think if it\'s a rule at your work.I hope you to get your wish.
>> I hope that you can get your wish.And I\'m sorry when you called.
>> Correct I definitely didn\'t wake up. see you later.>> I definitely didn\'t wake up on time so see you later.I heard that your city is very cold.
>> Correct And The crimate it\'s frequently changed.>> And the climate is frequently changing.Anyway. always take care of your health.
>> Correct I think go to The Philippines. To studay.>> I\'m thinking of going to the Philippines to study.But i haven\'t decided yet.
>> Correct I\'m Just thinking about that.>> I\'m just thinking about that.I try to consider The issue more.
>> I\'ll try to consider further on the matter.
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