Nov.08.2011.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi! My Verna.
I was surprised when we talked.
How did you know Cyworld?
I used to do really activity when i was 18-26.
But I stopped there and withdrawed about a year ago.
Because That site was always nagging to other people.
I guess, I wanted to be alone.
Exactly I feel some sad. But i had Freedom to other people.
And i'm not a popular man,I'm just korean.
I like thinking,but i don't say to other people.
My hobby is thinking.
Becuase It looks like some conservative.
Also I dont say interesting in reading.
So l always say. my hobby is jogging.
Becuase Koreans don't like some conservative.
We pursue Fun , Alcohol , girl between men.
But i don't like them.
I had unavoidably had them in militray.
But i don't pursue things.
If you involved some Job with one of koreans,
Alwyas Watch out for Koreans.
They're like fox, they'll measure and purse their behalf of money.
You know.I taught alot of Koreans, and i know their's attitude.
강사 첨삭
Wazup
I'm quite surprised at the same time amused of your humbling bluntness. So far, I met very few Koreans who openly talks about Korean culture's negative side. You're very courageous to do so yet very objective to have seen those negative aspects. There's nothing wrong with your belief and principle
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