Nov.09.2011.
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Hi.There.^_^ Teacher Lara.
I listened to our talked a moment ago.
I guess, i'm half asleep.
I'm active when i studied with T.Verna.
But I guess I'll probably wake up from your call.-_-
And have you ever had lower body bathing.
I always enjoy it every weekend.
The reason why i did it.
When I was young. I was a serious allergy cold.
I was continuously hard to fight disease.
I went to famous hospital and met alot of doctors.
But they said.
It can't get well. Uou should adapt your disease.
I was dissappointed about medicine.
But It was suffered all day.
I guess probably I was changed my personality because of the disease.
When i was in high school. I'm flapping channel. I watched Medicine channel by chance.
The doctors explained. Lower body bathing.
He said. The action that to sweat ,besides It ll increasely be pulmonary function.
so I have been doing for Seven years.And i haven't caught a cold since i do it.
If you have a chance to do, I recommend it
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Hi [이름]!!! I understand that you\'re kinda half-awake everytime you answer my call. I have a solution for that matter, just try to sleep in an earlier time so that you\'ll be fully awake for our class time. I hope that this will do good.
Hi.There.^_^ Teacher Lara.
>> Hi there Teacher Lara.I listened to our talked a moment ago.
>> I listened to our conversation a moment ago.I guess, i\'m half asleep.
>> I guess that I was half awake.I\'m active when i studied with T.Verna.
>> I\'m active when I study with T.Verna.But I guess I\'ll probably wake up from your call.-_->> But I think I\'ll probably wake myself up for your call.And have you ever had lower body bathing.
>> Have you ever tried the lower body bathing?I always enjoy it every weekend.
>> Correct The reason why i did it.>> The reason why I\'m doing it. (your sentence should be in present continuous form since you\'re still doing it until now)When I was young. I was a serious allergy cold.
>> When I was young, I had a serious cold allergy.I was continuously hard to fight disease.
>> I was I went to famous hospital and met alot of doctors.
>> I went to a famous hospital and met a lot of doctors.But they said.It can\'t get well. Uou should adapt your disease.>> But they said that my disease is uncurable that I should adapt to it.I was dissappointed about medicine.
>> Correct But It was suffered all day.>> It was a suffering day of my life.I guess probably I was changed my personality because of the disease.>> I guess my personality has changed because of the disease.When i was in high school. I\'m flapping channel. I watched Medicine channel by chance.>> When I was in high school I like flipping channels on tv. I watched medical channel by chance.The doctors explained. Lower body bathing.
>> The doctors explained about lower body bathing.He said. The action that to sweat ,besides It ll increasely be pulmonary function.>> He said that this procedure will help you sweat and will help you increase your pulmonary function.so I have been doing for Seven years.And i haven\'t caught a cold since i do it.>> So I have been doing this for seven years and I haven\'t catched a cold since then.If you have a chance to do, I recommend it
>> If you have a chance to do it, I will recommend it to you.
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