Nov.09.2011.

2011-11-09 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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Hi.There.^_^ Teacher Lara. I listened to our talked a moment ago. I guess, i'm half asleep. I'm active when i studied with T.Verna. But I guess I'll probably wake up from your call.-_- And have you ever had lower body bathing. I always enjoy it every weekend. The reason why i did it. When I was young. I was a serious allergy cold. I was continuously hard to fight disease. I went to famous hospital and met alot of doctors. But they said. It can't get well. Uou should adapt your disease. I was dissappointed about medicine. But It was suffered all day. I guess probably I was changed my personality because of the disease. When i was in high school. I'm flapping channel. I watched Medicine channel by chance. The doctors explained. Lower body bathing. He said. The action that to sweat ,besides It ll increasely be pulmonary function. so I have been doing for Seven years.And i haven't caught a cold since i do it. If you have a chance to do, I recommend it

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Hi [이름]!!!  I understand that you\'re kinda half-awake everytime you answer my call. I have a solution for that matter, just try to sleep in an earlier time so that you\'ll be fully awake for our class time.  I hope that this will do good.   Hi.There.^_^ Teacher Lara. >> Hi there Teacher Lara.I listened to our talked a moment ago. >> I listened to our conversation a moment ago.I guess, i\'m half asleep. >> I guess that I was half awake.I\'m active when i studied with T.Verna. >> I\'m active when I study with T.Verna.But I guess I\'ll probably wake up from your call.-_->> But I think I\'ll probably wake myself up for your call.And have you ever had lower body bathing. >> Have you ever tried the lower body bathing?I always enjoy it every weekend. >> Correct The reason why i did it.>> The reason why I\'m doing it. (your sentence should be in present continuous form since you\'re still doing it until now)When I was young. I was a serious allergy cold. >> When I was young, I had a serious cold allergy.I was continuously hard to fight disease. >> I was I went to famous hospital and met alot of doctors. >> I went to a famous hospital and met a lot of doctors.But they said.It can\'t get well. Uou should adapt your disease.>> But they said that my disease is uncurable that I should adapt to it.I was dissappointed about medicine. >> Correct But It was suffered all day.>> It was a suffering day of my life.I guess probably I was changed my personality because of the disease.>> I guess my personality has changed because of the disease.When i was in high school. I\'m flapping channel. I watched Medicine channel by chance.>> When I was in high school I like flipping channels on tv. I watched medical channel by chance.The doctors explained. Lower body bathing. >> The doctors explained about lower body bathing.He said. The action that to sweat ,besides It ll increasely be pulmonary function.>> He said that this procedure will help you sweat and will help you increase your pulmonary function.so I have been doing for Seven years.And i haven\'t caught a cold since i do it.>> So I have been doing this for seven years and I haven\'t catched a cold since then.If you have a chance to do, I recommend it >> If you have a chance to do it, I will recommend it to you.  

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