Nov. 1 . 2011
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you do normally after work?
I usually study english and write composition to you.
and run everyday for being health.
What are you important for living?
I'm the most important that a person of mind.
It's kind,honest and just that.
Have you ever been to other countries?
I haven't been to other counties,because i was a sad soldier.
Do you have a boy friend?
I don't have a girl friend,becuase i want to be life alone Now.
Do you live with someone? or alone?
I live with my parents, becuase it don't pay money, and my mother wish is living with me until now.
What are you doing in your free time or hobby?
You know,my hobby is jogging. i run everyday around my house.
I guess,You definitely don't know about North Korea.
North Korea people come South Korea from their nation.
There is called " get out" Korea called Tal Bok Ja.
I heard as Tal Bok Ja North korea about their life.
It's miserable to live.
i heard when i went to reserve forces training.
강사 첨삭
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What do you do normally after work?>>CorrectI usually study English and write composition for you.
>>Correctand run everyday for being health.>>And I run everyday to be healthy.What are you important for living?
>>What are the inmportant things for living for you?I\'m the most important that a person of mind.
>>For me, the most important things for a person are:It\'s kind,honest and just that.>>These are being kind, and honest. Have you ever been to other countries?>>CorrectI haven\'t been to other counties, because I was a sad soldier.>>CorrectDo you have a boy friend?
>>CorrectI don\'t have a girl friend,becuase i want to be life alone Now.>>I don\'t have a girlfriend because I want life a alone now.Do you live with someone? or alone?>>CorrectI live with my parents, becuase it don\'t pay money, and my mother wish is living with me until now.>>I live with my parents because I don\'t need to pay money and my mother wishes to live with me until now.What are you doing in your free time or hobby?
>>Correct
>>What do you do in your free time? What is your hobby?You know, my hobby is jogging. I run everyday around my house.>>CorrectI guess,You definitely don\'t know about North Korea.
>>CorrectNorth Korea people come South Korea from their nation.
>>
North Korean people came from South Korea as a nation.There is called \" get out\" Korea called Tal Bok Ja.>>It is called \"get out\" in Korea which means Tal Bok Ja.I heard as Tal Bok Ja North korea about their life.
>>I heard about North Koreans life as Tal Bok Ja.It\'s miserable to live.>>Correcti heard when i went to reserve forces training.
>> I heard that when I went to reserve forces training.
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