Nov.10.2011.

2011-11-10 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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I can change my sleeping time. i think i'm a sensitive person. So I offer wake up during sleeping. it's a sad habit. Suddently i wonder. I'm 173cm and 71kilogram do they explain a right? Anyway Today.I'll wake up before your call. I don't like Korean's women about what i know. What if you go out with Korean Man. I know. i can separate Kind of Korean men. First type region. korea have 4 region. Gyeongsang do, Jeolla do , Capital and Gangwon do. I'm G.S do. G.S people is mostly rough, don't like lie. they are moody.Big personality. Jeolla do I don't like Jeolla do. they are like foxes. Mostly people don't like Jeolla do. They always looked for their behalf, i have experienced them until now. Capital They're kind and careful to something and caution everthing.But stuffy. Gangwon do.They're naive and believed other people. i love them. But these are more environments than things. I evaluate that i saw Only their walking hahit. I can mostly know their personality.

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Hi [이름]!!!  I have experienced going out with Korean men and I found them really interesting guys. Anyway, regarding your composition [이름], I think you need to make your writing simplier and make sure that you point out the subject of your writing well. Don;t tend to jump from one idea to another. Take care.   I can change my sleeping time. i think i\'m a sensitive person. >> I can change my sleeping time. I think I\'m a sensitive person.So I offer wake up during sleeping. it\'s a sad habit. >> (WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY THIS SENTENCE [이름]? KINDLY EXPLAIN THIS FURTHER. THANK YOU.) Suddently i wonder. >> I suddenly wonder.I\'m 173cm and 71kilogram do they explain a right? >> I\'m 173 cm tall and weighing 71 kilogram. Did I explain this right?Anyway Today.I\'ll wake up before your call.>> Anyway, I\'ll to wake up earlier before your call.I don\'t like Korean\'s women about what i know. >> I don\'t like Korean women and I know them well.What if you go out with Korean Man. >> Do you go out with a Korean man?I know. i can separate Kind of Korean men. >> I know how to differentiate Korean men.First type region. korea have 4 region. >> First is the type of region they came from. Korea has 4 regions.Gyeongsang do, Jeolla do , Capital and Gangwon do. >> Correct I\'m G.S do. >> I\'m from G.S do.G.S people is mostly rough, don\'t like lie. they are moody.Big personality. >> G.S people are mostly rough, they don\'t like to lie. They are moody but have a great personality.Jeolla do >> Correct I don\'t like Jeolla do. they are like foxes. Mostly people don\'t like Jeolla do. >> I don\'t like peopple from Jeolla do, they are like foxes. Most people don\'t like them.They always looked for their behalf, i have experienced them until now. >> They are always looking for their behalf. I have experienced that thought until now.Capital >> Correct They\'re kind and careful to something and caution everthing.But stuffy. >> They\'re kind and careful about something and cautious about everything but stuffy on the otherhand.Gangwon do.They\'re naive and believed other people. i love them. >> People from Gangwon do are naive and they believe other people. I love them.But these are more environments than things. >> These are only about the environment rather material things.I evaluate that i saw Only their walking hahit. >> I juts noticed their walking habit.I can mostly know their personality. >> I know more about their personality.

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