Nov. 13.2011.

2011-11-14 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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My brother said last week. He's going on a blind date today. So far as i'm concerned, his job is very popular in Korea's woman. That Job is LG Program a researcher. I guess Many woman would wanna get married to more the job than people. My ex-girlfriend always said. Whether you must be getting a high salary job or not we might have to break up. I understood at that time. But i realized top of divorce rate in Korea. I guess its ratio don't change for the time being. The reason why if i was them. I'll choose some good condition. Anyway, my brother is bright , smart and a good person. He graduated accessit from University. He had Never studied at home however always he was the first grade in school. On reflection,I envied him when i was adolescence. But I could catch him, I was always one step behind at home. I wanted to be attention from my parents. But They couldn't like my personal elements. I was problem child when i was in middle. My grade was the bottom.

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Hello [이름],       I\'m grateful for your trust. I really admire you as a person. I think that because of your childhood experiences you became a strong  man. I know that you have very good characteristics as a person. Just always smile and enjoy life! See you later! -T.Verna-   My brother said last week.He\'s going on a blind date today. >> My bother said last week that hew is going on a blind date today. >> Last week, my brother told me that he is going to on a blind date today.So far as i\'m concerned, his job is very popular in Korea\'s woman. >>As far as he is concern, his job is very  poppular to Korean women.That Job is LG Program a researcher. >> That job is LG program researcher.I guess Many woman would wanna get married to more the job than people. >> I guess many women would want to marry him because of his job more than other people.My ex-girlfriend always said. >>CorrectWhether you must be getting a high salary job or not we might have to break up. >>Whether I was getting a high salary from my job or not we must break up.I understood at that time. >>That\'s how I understoof it that time.But i realized top of divorce rate in Korea. >>But I realized the tope reason of divorce in Korea.I guess its ratio don\'t change for the time being. >> I guess the ratio didn\'t change from the time it was made.The reason why if i was them.I\'ll choose some good condition. >>The reason is that, if I were them I\'ll choose doof condition.Anyway, my brother is bright , smart and a good person. >>CorrectHe graduated accessit from University. >>He graduated from the University.He had Never studied at home however always he was the first grade in school. >>He didn\'t study at home however, he was always the firsdt in school.On reflection,I envied him when i was adolescence. >>While reflecting from the past, I envied his during our adolescense.But I could catch him, >>But I could catch up on him.I was always one step behind at home. >>CorrectI wanted to be attention from my parents. >>I wanted to get the attention from my parents.But They couldn\'t like my personal elements. >>But they didn\'t like my personal elements.I was problem child when i was in middle. >>I was a problem child when I was in the middle school.My grade was the bottom. >>My grade was  low.  

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