Nov. 13.2011.
학생이 쓴 원문
My brother said last week.
He's going on a blind date today.
So far as i'm concerned, his job is very popular in Korea's woman.
That Job is LG Program a researcher.
I guess Many woman would wanna get married to more the job than people.
My ex-girlfriend always said.
Whether you must be getting a high salary job or not we might have to break up.
I understood at that time.
But i realized top of divorce rate in Korea.
I guess its ratio don't change for the time being.
The reason why if i was them.
I'll choose some good condition.
Anyway, my brother is bright , smart and a good person.
He graduated accessit from University.
He had Never studied at home however always he was the first grade in school.
On reflection,I envied him when i was adolescence.
But I could catch him,
I was always one step behind at home.
I wanted to be attention from my parents.
But They couldn't like my personal elements.
I was problem child when i was in middle.
My grade was the bottom.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
I\'m grateful for your trust. I really admire you as a person. I think that because of your childhood experiences you became a strong man. I know that you have very good characteristics as a person. Just always smile and enjoy life! See you later!
-T.Verna-
My brother said last week.He\'s going on a blind date today.
>> My bother said last week that hew is going on a blind date today.
>> Last week, my brother told me that he is going to on a blind date today.So far as i\'m concerned, his job is very popular in Korea\'s woman.
>>As far as he is concern, his job is very poppular to Korean women.That Job is LG Program a researcher.
>> That job is LG program researcher.I guess Many woman would wanna get married to more the job than people.
>> I guess many women would want to marry him because of his job more than other people.My ex-girlfriend always said.
>>CorrectWhether you must be getting a high salary job or not we might have to break up.
>>Whether I was getting a high salary from my job or not we must break up.I understood at that time.
>>That\'s how I understoof it that time.But i realized top of divorce rate in Korea.
>>But I realized the tope reason of divorce in Korea.I guess its ratio don\'t change for the time being.
>> I guess the ratio didn\'t change from the time it was made.The reason why if i was them.I\'ll choose some good condition.
>>The reason is that, if I were them I\'ll choose doof condition.Anyway, my brother is bright , smart and a good person.
>>CorrectHe graduated accessit from University.
>>He graduated from the University.He had Never studied at home however always he was the first grade in school.
>>He didn\'t study at home however, he was always the firsdt in school.On reflection,I envied him when i was adolescence.
>>While reflecting from the past, I envied his during our adolescense.But I could catch him,
>>But I could catch up on him.I was always one step behind at home.
>>CorrectI wanted to be attention from my parents.
>>I wanted to get the attention from my parents.But They couldn\'t like my personal elements.
>>But they didn\'t like my personal elements.I was problem child when i was in middle.
>>I was a problem child when I was in the middle school.My grade was the bottom.
>>My grade was low.
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