Nov.15.2011
학생이 쓴 원문
I said yesterday.
I tested other site for level test.
I was a little disappionted about that.
But It's so weird
I did four site but it came out some difference result.
One site became 4level, but the other site became max level 6~7.
I was confused But I'm pretty sure i improve a little bit.
I'm gonna study our website about two months.
And i'll probably go to your nation and Baguio.
But it's the most important problem to pronunce english.
Anyway, i have to try alot of efforts that it's simply answer.
and then, our site Teachers are a good people to compare other to our teachers.
And i slept at about 11 pm. yesterday.
So far as i'm thinking of sleep, perhanps i was fainting.
I woke up at 4 am.
The day began cold since yesterday in Korea.
I don't catch colds since doing lower body bathing, perhaps it's about seven years.
Iet's cheer up.
I believe the power of optimism.
English Phone teachers always said.
Time is over.so i can say Typing is over.
See you around.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!! You know what, I enjoyed reading your composition today. You put a smile on my face!!! I love that!!! Thank you. I can say that there\'s some improvements in your writing. Just keep it up!!! It\'s nice to know that you\'re really enjoying your time with your teachers from Power English and I hope you\'ll stay with us for a long time. Again take care and talk to you soon then.
I said yesterday.
>> Correct
>> or I told you yesterday.I tested other site for level test.
>> I tested other sites for level testing.I was a little disappionted about that.
>> Correct
But It\'s so weird
>> But it\'s so weird.I did four site but it came out some difference result.
>> I did four sites but I got different results.
>> I did four sites but I got various results.One site became 4level, but the other site became max level 6~7.
>> I got level 4 on one site but got a maximum level 6-7 from the other site.I was confused But I\'m pretty sure i improve a little bit.
>> I was confused but I\'m pretty sure I improved a little bit.I\'m gonna study our website about two months.
>> I\'m going to study on your website for two months.And i\'ll probably go to your nation and Baguio.
>> And I\'ll probably go to your country and Baguio City.But it\'s the most important problem to pronunce english.
>> But the most important issue is the proper English pronunciation.Anyway, i have to try alot of efforts that it\'s simply answer.
>> Anyway, I have to try a lot of effort to simplify my answer.
>> Anyway, I ahve to try a lot of effort to give a simple answer.and then, our site Teachers are a good people to compare other to our teachers.
>> And then, teachers on our site are good people compare to other teachers.And i slept at about 11 pm. yesterday.
>> I slept at about 11 pm last night.
>> I went to bed at about 11 pm last night.So far as i\'m thinking of sleep, perhanps i was fainting.
>> So far as I\'m thinking of sleep perhaps I was about to faint.I woke up at 4 am.
>> Correct The day began cold since yesterday in Korea.
>> It began to get cold since yesterday in Korea.I don\'t catch colds since doing lower body bathing, perhaps it\'s about seven years.
>> I don\'t catch colds since doing the lower body bathing for about seven years now.Iet\'s cheer up.
>> Let\'s cheer up.I believe the power of optimism.
>> Correct English Phone teachers always said.
>> Correct Time is over.so i can say Typing is over.
>> Time is over so I can say typing is over. See you around.
>> Correct
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