Nov.15.2011

2011-11-15 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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I said yesterday. I tested other site for level test. I was a little disappionted about that. But It's so weird I did four site but it came out some difference result. One site became 4level, but the other site became max level 6~7. I was confused But I'm pretty sure i improve a little bit. I'm gonna study our website about two months. And i'll probably go to your nation and Baguio. But it's the most important problem to pronunce english. Anyway, i have to try alot of efforts that it's simply answer. and then, our site Teachers are a good people to compare other to our teachers. And i slept at about 11 pm. yesterday. So far as i'm thinking of sleep, perhanps i was fainting. I woke up at 4 am. The day began cold since yesterday in Korea. I don't catch colds since doing lower body bathing, perhaps it's about seven years. Iet's cheer up. I believe the power of optimism. English Phone teachers always said. Time is over.so i can say Typing is over. See you around.

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Hi [이름]!!!  You know what, I enjoyed reading your composition today. You put a smile on my face!!! I love that!!! Thank you. I can say that there\'s some improvements in your writing. Just keep it up!!! It\'s nice to know that you\'re really enjoying your time with your teachers from Power English and I hope you\'ll stay with us for a long time. Again take care and talk to you soon then.   I said yesterday. >> Correct >> or I told you yesterday.I tested other site for level test. >> I tested other sites for level testing.I was a little disappionted about that. >> Correct But It\'s so weird >> But it\'s so weird.I did four site but it came out some difference result. >> I did four sites but I got different results. >> I did four sites but I got various results.One site became 4level, but the other site became max level 6~7. >> I got level 4 on one site but got a maximum level 6-7 from the other site.I was confused But I\'m pretty sure i improve a little bit. >> I was confused but I\'m pretty sure I improved a little bit.I\'m gonna study our website about two months. >> I\'m going to study on your website for two months.And i\'ll probably go to your nation and Baguio. >> And I\'ll probably go to your country and Baguio City.But it\'s the most important problem to pronunce english. >> But the most important issue is the proper English pronunciation.Anyway, i have to try alot of efforts that it\'s simply answer. >> Anyway, I have to try a lot of effort to simplify my answer. >> Anyway, I ahve to try a lot of effort to give a simple answer.and then, our site Teachers are a good people to compare other to our teachers. >> And then, teachers on our site are good people compare to other teachers.And i slept at about 11 pm. yesterday. >> I slept at about 11 pm last night. >> I went to bed at about 11 pm last night.So far as i\'m thinking of sleep, perhanps i was fainting. >> So far as I\'m thinking of sleep perhaps I was about to faint.I woke up at 4 am. >> Correct The day began cold since yesterday in Korea. >> It began to get cold since yesterday in Korea.I don\'t catch colds since doing lower body bathing, perhaps it\'s about seven years. >> I don\'t catch colds since doing the lower body bathing for about seven years now.Iet\'s cheer up. >> Let\'s cheer up.I believe the power of optimism. >> Correct English Phone teachers always said. >> Correct Time is over.so i can say Typing is over. >> Time is over so I can say typing is over. See you around. >> Correct

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