Nov.16.2011.

I reviewed our class. Carefully,I guess people have individual precious things. For example,Money,quality of life, religion. There are their subjective,because we have experienced different environment. My nation is strict about legislation. so If i had some crime,I don't get a job because of that crime. In addition to be rigid,We can't get a job due to crime records. That records can't erase in Korea. And their children don't get a job for public officer. My friend apply for military officer course. He had high grades in University.But he failed it. Becuase of his father. It's actually Korea's policy. so far as i'm thinking of that. I guess The reason that we have been under a flag of truce. I can't do anything. we just have to endure and patience Come until a new good revolutionist. I believe that other aspects of the life and except people should do their human right. I always pursue them But there are not easy. Anyway,I haven't slept since yesterday.

Hello [이름],       I think youreally didn\'t sleeep just to make your composition. Thank you! I just hope you won\'t get sick. Try get sleep then do your homework. Take care! -Verna- I reviewed our class. >>CorrectCarefully,I guess people have individual precious things. >>I guess, every invidual handles precious thing carefully.For example,Money,quality of life, religion. >>For example, money, quality of life and religion.There are their subjective,because we have experienced different environment. >>It\'s their choice because we have different experiences and environment.My nation is strict about legislation. >>Correctso If i had some crime,I don\'t get a job because of that crime. >>So if I committed a crime, I can\'t get a job because of that. In addition to be rigid, we can\'t get a job due to crime records. >>To be rigid, we can\'t get a job due to crime records.That records can\'t erase in Korea. >>Those records couldn\'t be erased in Korea.And their children don\'t get a job for public officer. >>And their children can\'t get a job as a public officer.My friend apply for military officer course. >>My friend applied for a military officer course.He had high grades in University.But he failed it. >>His grades in the University were high but he failed it.Because of his father. >>CorrectIt\'s actually Korea\'s policy. so far as i\'m thinking of that. >>I think it is actually Korea\'s policy.I guess The reason that we have been under a flag of truce. >>I guess that\'s the reason why we\'ve been in a flag truce.I can\'t do anything. we just have to endure and patience >>I can\'t  do anything, we just have to endure and be patient.Come until a new good revolutionist. >>Until a new good revolutionalist will come.I believe that other aspects of the life and except people should do their human right. >>I believe in all other aspects of life and people should accept their human rights.I always pursue them But there are not easy. >>I always try to convience them but it is not easy.Anyway, I haven\'t slept since yesterday. >>Correct