Nov.17.2011

2011-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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Hi Teacher Verna. Today is Thursday. I'm so happy. Becuase I can see Drama series On Wednesday and Thursday. The title is Root deep Wood. You told me before, you liked Korea drama Dea Jang Geum. That Drama Genre is historical drama. I have a good memory.and don't forget one thing to hear. I like historical drama. Just i have No Reason. Anyway,I was shopping on the internet. I bought some clothes, shoes, gloves, and casual belf. But it's more cheaper than going department store. I bought them The reason why my mother told me. Buy some clothes. So I paid for my credit card. I enjoy eating out alone sometime. But My friends told me.It's so sad story to have alone.however i enjoy it. From my point of view,It's not sad. but many people feel afraid about that. Perhaps,They haven't challenge it, so I guess they are careful. Because it looks like out cast, As a matter of fact,You know Koreans are important outside. So They feel fear alone.

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Hello there [이름],             Wow! You are really an exceptional person. I think people are really afraid of being alone so, they don\'t eat in a restaurant alone. In my case, I also don\'t want to eat alone because I want to have fun while eating so  it won\'t be boring. kikiki.. Anyway, thanks for sharing your thoughts with me today. Enjoy your day ahead! -T.Verna-   Hi Teacher Verna.>>CorrectToday is Thursday. I\'m so happy. >>CorrectBecuase I can see Drama series On Wednesday and Thursday. >>Because I can see a drama series every Wedsnesday and Thursday.The title is Root dDeep Wood.>>CorrectYou told me before, you liked Korea drama Dea Jang Geum. >>You told me before that you like the drama Dae Jang Geum.That Drama Genre is historical drama. >>That soap opera\'s genre is historical drama.I have a good memory.and don\'t forget one thing to hear. >>I have a good memory and I don\'t forget thing when I hear it.I like historical drama. >>Correct  Just i have No Reason.>>I don\'t have special reason tohugh.Anyway,I was shopping on the internet. >>Anyway, I shopped on the internet.I bought some clothes, shoes, gloves, and casual belf. >>I bought some clothes, shoes, gloves and casual belt.But it\'s more cheaper than going department store.>>And it\'s cheaper than going to a department store.I bought them The reason why my mother told me. >>I bought them because my mom told me so.Buy some clothes. >>CorrectSo I paid for my credit card.>>CorrectI enjoy eating out alone sometimes. >>Correct >> I sometimes enjoy eating out alone.But My friends told me.It\'s so sad story to have alone.however i enjoy it. >>My friends told me it sound so sad however, I enjoy it.From my point of view,It\'s not sad. but many people feel afraid about that.>>From my point of view it\'s  not sad but many people are afraid to do it.Perhaps,They haven\'t challenge it, so I guess they are careful. >>Perhaps they haven\'t tried it so they are care.Because it looks like out cast, >>Because it looks like an outcast.As a matter of fact,You know Koreans are important outside. >>As a matter of fact, Koreans care much about what\'s outside.So They feel fear alone. >>So, they are afraid to be alone.  

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