Nov.18.2011.

2011-11-18 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

학생이 쓴 원문

I reviewed our class like yesterday. We talked about Korean soap drama. You meaned that the title is shot for Kong Nam? I searched Kim Seo Hyun on the internet. but i can't find anything. Today is already Firday. Let's have a great weekend. as far as you worked by today,Deserve your time on the weekend. If i were in your shoes,I could understand a little bit. I'm irregular to go to bed every day. it's not insomnia if i could expain my country's system. You could comprehend a little about me. I reraly think about going to Church. But ministers always take advantage of my ability. so I was unhappy because of people. I just want to be free from what i do. so I'm bumming however i'm so happy. I want to take break time for myself. I guess my mind spoke out about that. Speed is never important,Way is more important. I don't know myself. i lived for my parents. Becuase i always pursued people eye's attentions. Do you believe God? But We have to believe ourselves frist.

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Hi [이름],         Thanks for this composition. About the drama that I was telling you the title is \" Prosecutor princess\". The actress  name is Kim So Yun. I hope you get to know her Take care! Enjoy the weekend! -Verna- I reviewed our class like yesterday. >>CorrectWe talked about Korean soap drama. >>CorrectYou meaned that the title is shot for Kong Nam? >>Did you mean that the title is short for Kong Nam?I searched Kim Seo Hyun on the internet but i can\'t find anything. >>CorrectToday is already Firday. >>CorrectLet\'s have a great weekend. >>Correctas far as you worked by today,Deserve your time on the weekend. >>As far as you work hard today, you deserve your time on the weekend.If i were in your shoes,I could understand a little bit. >>CorrectI\'m irregular to go to bed every day. >>I irregularly go to bed everyday.it\'s not insomnia if i could expain my country\'s system. >>It is not insomnia. I wish I could explain our country\'s system.You could comprehend a little about me. >>CorrectI reraly think about going to Church. >>I rarely think about going to church.But ministers always take advantage of my ability. >>CorrectSo I was unhappy because of people. >>CorrectI just want to be free from what I do. >>CorrectSo I\'m bumming however I\'m so happy. >>CorrectI want to take break time for myself. >>CorrectI guess my mind spoke out about that. >>I guesss it is what is getting out of my mind. >> I guess it running in my mind.Speed is never important,Way is more important. >>Speed is never important. The way is more important.I don\'t know myself. >>Correct  I lived for my parents. >>Correct Becuase i always pursued people eye\'s attentions. >>Because I always pursued people\'s attention.Do you believe God? >>Do you believe in God?But We have to believe ourselves frist. >>But we have to believe ourselves first.

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