Nov.18.2011.
학생이 쓴 원문
I reviewed our class like yesterday.
We talked about Korean soap drama.
You meaned that the title is shot for Kong Nam?
I searched Kim Seo Hyun on the internet. but i can't find anything.
Today is already Firday.
Let's have a great weekend.
as far as you worked by today,Deserve your time on the weekend.
If i were in your shoes,I could understand a little bit.
I'm irregular to go to bed every day.
it's not insomnia if i could expain my country's system.
You could comprehend a little about me.
I reraly think about going to Church.
But ministers always take advantage of my ability.
so I was unhappy because of people.
I just want to be free from what i do.
so I'm bumming however i'm so happy.
I want to take break time for myself.
I guess my mind spoke out about that.
Speed is never important,Way is more important.
I don't know myself. i lived for my parents.
Becuase i always pursued people eye's attentions.
Do you believe God?
But We have to believe ourselves frist.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Thanks for this composition. About the drama that I was telling you the title is \" Prosecutor princess\". The actress name is Kim So Yun. I hope you get to know her Take care! Enjoy the weekend!
-Verna-
I reviewed our class like yesterday.
>>CorrectWe talked about Korean soap drama.
>>CorrectYou meaned that the title is shot for Kong Nam?
>>Did you mean that the title is short for Kong Nam?I searched Kim Seo Hyun on the internet but i can\'t find anything.
>>CorrectToday is already Firday.
>>CorrectLet\'s have a great weekend.
>>Correctas far as you worked by today,Deserve your time on the weekend.
>>As far as you work hard today, you deserve your time on the weekend.If i were in your shoes,I could understand a little bit.
>>CorrectI\'m irregular to go to bed every day.
>>I irregularly go to bed everyday.it\'s not insomnia if i could expain my country\'s system.
>>It is not insomnia. I wish I could explain our country\'s system.You could comprehend a little about me.
>>CorrectI reraly think about going to Church.
>>I rarely think about going to church.But ministers always take advantage of my ability.
>>CorrectSo I was unhappy because of people.
>>CorrectI just want to be free from what I do.
>>CorrectSo I\'m bumming however I\'m so happy.
>>CorrectI want to take break time for myself.
>>CorrectI guess my mind spoke out about that.
>>I guesss it is what is getting out of my mind.
>> I guess it running in my mind.Speed is never important,Way is more important.
>>Speed is never important. The way is more important.I don\'t know myself.
>>Correct
I lived for my parents.
>>Correct
Becuase i always pursued people eye\'s attentions.
>>Because I always pursued people\'s attention.Do you believe God?
>>Do you believe in God?But We have to believe ourselves frist.
>>But we have to believe ourselves first.
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