Nov.19.2011.

2011-11-21 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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Hi,Teacher Lara.How about your weekend?I'm staying at home. My nation have over 200 TV channels However i don't watch TV. My sleeping time is always irregular after i finished military. As far as I'm concerned,I have Freedom, so perhaps the reason. Despite a decade ago, Internet shopping is not promising. But Now many youth people try to establish online shopping mall on the internet. I heard you before. your Nation is still not activity. the business would be promsing commerce But i don't know obvious time. you told me already,Very few people use that serive.Maybe richer. I watched Philippines's Movie.the title is Lola(Grandmother) the movie was a little sad story. I Love watching Movie at home, reading Book, enjoy jogging. These things are my vitality for living And i bought more clothes and accessory on the internet. These things costed about 400 hundred dollars i did exchange. Maybe these things are going to me from Monday to Wednesday. Have you had a great weekend?

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Hi [이름]!!!  It\'s nice to know that you had a great weekend. Well, as for my weekend, I also stayed home and watched a lot of American movies. Watching is really my favorite hobby  It\'s so wonderful for you to try watching a movie from my country-Philippines. I hope you could get more interest in knowing my country by watching some of our movies.   Hi,Teacher Lara.How about your weekend?I\'m staying at home. >> Hi Teacher Lara. My nation have over 200 TV channels However i don\'t watch TV. >> My nation has over 200 tv channels but I don\'t watch programs on tv.My sleeping time is always irregular after i finished military. >> My sleeping time is always irregular after I finished in military.As far as I\'m concerned,I have Freedom, so perhaps the reason. >> As far as I\'m concerned, I have a freedom so perhaps that is the reason.Despite a decade ago, Internet shopping is not promising. >> Despite a decade ago, internet shopping is not that promising.But Now many youth people try to establish online shopping mall on the internet. >> But now many young people try to establish online shopping mall on the internet.I heard you before. your Nation is still not activity. >> I heard from you before that your country is still not into that activity.the business would be promsing commerce But i don\'t know obvious time. >> The busines would boom but I don\'t know when is the proper time.you told me already,Very few people use that serive.Maybe richer. >> You already told me that very few people use that service, maybe the rich people.I watched Philippines\'s Movie.the title is Lola(Grandmother) >> I watched a Pilippine\'s movie and the tilte is Lola (Grandmother).the movie was a little sad story. >> The movie has a little sad story.I Love watching Movie at home, reading Book, enjoy jogging. >> I love watching movies at home, reading books and enjoy jogging.These things are my vitality for living >> CorrectAnd i bought more clothes and accessory on the internet. >> And I bought more clothes and accessories on the internet.These things costed about 400 hundred dollars i did exchange. >> These things cost me about $400.Maybe these things are going to me from Monday to Wednesday. >> Maybe these items will be delivered to me by Monday to Wednesday.Have you had a great weekend? >> Correct

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