Nov.19.2011.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi,Teacher Lara.How about your weekend?I'm staying at home.
My nation have over 200 TV channels However i don't watch TV.
My sleeping time is always irregular after i finished military.
As far as I'm concerned,I have Freedom, so perhaps the reason.
Despite a decade ago, Internet shopping is not promising.
But Now many youth people try to establish online shopping mall on the internet.
I heard you before. your Nation is still not activity.
the business would be promsing commerce But i don't know obvious time.
you told me already,Very few people use that serive.Maybe richer.
I watched Philippines's Movie.the title is Lola(Grandmother)
the movie was a little sad story.
I Love watching Movie at home, reading Book, enjoy jogging.
These things are my vitality for living
And i bought more clothes and accessory on the internet.
These things costed about 400 hundred dollars i did exchange.
Maybe these things are going to me from Monday to Wednesday.
Have you had a great weekend?
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!! It\'s nice to know that you had a great weekend. Well, as for my weekend, I also stayed home and watched a lot of American movies. Watching is really my favorite hobby It\'s so wonderful for you to try watching a movie from my country-Philippines. I hope you could get more interest in knowing my country by watching some of our movies.
Hi,Teacher Lara.How about your weekend?I\'m staying at home.
>> Hi Teacher Lara. My nation have over 200 TV channels However i don\'t watch TV.
>> My nation has over 200 tv channels but I don\'t watch programs on tv.My sleeping time is always irregular after i finished military.
>> My sleeping time is always irregular after I finished in military.As far as I\'m concerned,I have Freedom, so perhaps the reason.
>> As far as I\'m concerned, I have a freedom so perhaps that is the reason.Despite a decade ago, Internet shopping is not promising.
>> Despite a decade ago, internet shopping is not that promising.But Now many youth people try to establish online shopping mall on the internet.
>> But now many young people try to establish online shopping mall on the internet.I heard you before. your Nation is still not activity.
>> I heard from you before that your country is still not into that activity.the business would be promsing commerce But i don\'t know obvious time.
>> The busines would boom but I don\'t know when is the proper time.you told me already,Very few people use that serive.Maybe richer.
>> You already told me that very few people use that service, maybe the rich people.I watched Philippines\'s Movie.the title is Lola(Grandmother)
>> I watched a Pilippine\'s movie and the tilte is Lola (Grandmother).the movie was a little sad story.
>> The movie has a little sad story.I Love watching Movie at home, reading Book, enjoy jogging.
>> I love watching movies at home, reading books and enjoy jogging.These things are my vitality for living
>> CorrectAnd i bought more clothes and accessory on the internet.
>> And I bought more clothes and accessories on the internet.These things costed about 400 hundred dollars i did exchange.
>> These things cost me about $400.Maybe these things are going to me from Monday to Wednesday.
>> Maybe these items will be delivered to me by Monday to Wednesday.Have you had a great weekend?
>> Correct
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