Nov.2. 2011.

2011-11-02 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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I went to english conversation yesterday. It had one of a kind thing,it was awesome. "I met military junior" He's ROTC 48th and i'm 46th. We talked at that time,i looked at him. He was freezing. I think it's Korea-Culture somewhere. It's important Senior-Respect in Korea. How about Philippines? I am wondering that some questions. How old are they on average in your evening class? How dreams do you imagine? First, my dream that i can speak english fluently, It doesn't have the reason. i just want. Second dream that i get a job for my attitude. I am always looking for the job. Third dream that i wanna get married to kind lady I always hope when i was a kid. What do you do for your dreams? I study english and i fix my attiude for adapting to be society. And i open my mind. don't have prejudice and i will directly see point of view. I think These are difficult, But i pursue , i Hope.

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Hi [이름]!!!  I\'m so glad to receive your composition again. Honestly, you are a very interesting man- [이름]. I truly appreciate all the things you said about yourself and I\'m still looking forward to knowing you more. I\'ll just give my answers to your questions later in our class. Take care and talk to you soon then.   I went to english conversation yesterday. >> I went to the English conversation class yesterday.It had one of a kind thing,it was awesome. >> It was one of a kind and it was awesome.\"I met military junior\" >> I met a junior military officer.He\'s ROTC 48th and i\'m 46th.>> He\'s ROTC 48th and I\'m 46th (Reminder: Always capitalize the noun \'I\' if your writing about yourself  )We talked at that time,i looked at him. >> We talked at that moment and I tried to observe him.He was freezing.>> Correct I think it\'s Korea-Culture somewhere. >> I think it\'s part of Korean culture.It\'s important Senior-Respect in Korea.>> It\'s important to respect our seniors in Korea.How about Philippines?>> How about there in the Philippines?I am wondering that some questions. >> I am wondering about that matter.How old are they on average in your evening class?>> What is the average age of your private students in the evening?How dreams do you imagine?>> What are your dreams?First, my dream that i can speak english fluently, >> First, my dream is to speak English fluently.It doesn\'t have the reason. i just want.>> I don\'t have any reason, I just want it.Second dream that i get a job for my attitude. >> Second, I dream to get a good job base on my attitude.I am always looking for the job.>> Correct Third dream that i wanna get married to kind lady >> Third, I dream to be married to a kind lady.I always hope when i was a kid.>> I always hope that when I was a kid.What do you do for your dreams?>> Correct I study english and i fix my attiude for adapting to be society. >> I study English and I develop my attitude to adapt in the society.And i open my mind. don\'t have prejudice and i will directly see point of view. >> And I\'m an open-minded person. I don\'t have any prejudice and I directly see the main point of a situation.I think These are difficult, But i pursue , i Hope. >> I think these are difficult to do but I\'m hoping that I could pursue it.

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