Nov.2.2011
학생이 쓴 원문
Are you satisfaction in your nation?
i'm very satisfaction in korea.
My nation has so many convenience facilities for living.
But these are everthing needs Money.
My friend said, he's US man.
Korea is a good living,
But if you didn't have money, it's directly unphappiness.
My name is [Name]- Hwa Jung in Korea name.
You can call me Ji-Hwa Please.
What are you meant your name?
My name is all Chinese character.
First name is Ji-Hwa. Ji is wisdom and hwa is harmony.
Last name is Jung. Jung is Nation.
So that mean that make harmonious nation for wisdom.
My father made that.
My name is some feminine name in Korea.
What do you do these days?
I'm bumming. i study english and read some books.
What are you important in your living?
The every minute of our life has reason.
Such as i fall in drug, some cirme occured,
These had our life,so i think i don't know in the future.
Always be humble, thank for living, other people should respect.
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Are you satisfaction in your nation?>> Are you satisfied with your nation?i\'m very satisfaction in korea.
>> I\'m very satisfied with Korea as a country.My nation has so many convenience facilities for living.
>> CorrectBut these are everthing needs Money.
>> But these things needs money.My friend said, he\'s US man.
>> My friend said he is an American.Korea is a good living, But if you didn\'t have money, it\'s directly unphappiness.>> It is good to live in Korea but if you don\'t have money you will be directly unhappy.
My name is [Name]- Hwa Jung in Korea name.
>> My Korean name is Ji- Hwa Jung.You can call me Ji-Hwa Please.
>> You can please call me Ji-Hwa.What are you meant your name?
>>What is the meaning of your name?My name is all Chinese character.
>>My name is compose of Chinese characters.First name is Ji-Hwa.
>>My first name is Ji-Hwa.
Ji is wisdom and hwa is harmony.
>>CorrectMy Last name is Jung.
>>correct
Jung is Nation. >>Correct
>> Jung means nation.
So that mean that make harmonious nation for wisdom.
>>So that means to make harmonous nation for wisdom.My father made that.>>CorrectMy name is a feminine name in Korea.>>CorrectWhat do you do these days?>>CorrectI\'m bumming.
>>Correct
I study english and read some books.>>I am studying English and reading some books.What are you important in your living?>>What are important things for your life?The every minute of our life has reason.
>>Every minute of our lives has reason.Such as i fall in drug, some cirme occured,
>>For example, I became addicted to frugs and commited some crimes.
Always be humble, thank for living, other people should respect.
>>Always be humble, be grateful and respect other people.
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