Nov. 2. 2011.
학생이 쓴 원문
It's on wednesday.
What did you do yesterday?
It's same days?
Could you tell me about your students in evening class?
I'm wondering that Korea people.
Do you have a boyfriend?
Is filipino or other nationality?
When did your last boyfriend break up with you?
The latest i became for about 7 mouths.
What movies is your favorite since you have seen?
What i know.
Could you recommend America Movie,so i'll recommend some movies.
If you had messenger, i can send some movies.
I had alot of movies,
Could you have Speaking Skill for Koean?
Could you tell me some words?
Do you like korea's culture?
I listened our conversation to review.
I found some different pronunciation yesterday.
These are difference that sound.
I have heard many compliment from other people.
Because of my voice.
But i heard my voice during reviewing.
It's other voice. it's a little sad story like kid.
I Hope and Decide.
I have to be calm down and try to make practice more.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
I think you did a great job in listening to our conversation. It will help you a lot. I\'m excited to talk to you to answer all your questions. see you in our class later. Please chack my corrections for you. Take care!
-Verna-
It\'s on wednesday.
>>It\'s a Wednesday.What did you do yesterday?>>Correct
It\'s same days?
>>Is it the same day?Could you tell me about your students in evening class?
>>CorrectI\'m wondering that Korea people.
>>I\'m wondering about Korean people.Do you have a boyfriend?
>>CorrectIs filipino or other nationality?>>Is he a filipino or other nationality?When did your last boyfriend break up with you?
>>CorrectThe latest I became for about 7 mouths.>>The latest break up I had was about seven moths.What movies is your favorite since you have seen?
>>What is your favorite movie?What i know.>>About what i know..Could you recommend America Movie, so i\'ll recommend some >>Could you recommend an American movie? So, I\'ll also recommend some movies.If you had messenger, I can send some movies.
>>CorrectI had alot of movies,>>I watched a lot of movies.Could you have Speaking Skill for Koean?>>Do you have Korean speaking skill?Could you tell me some words?>>CorrectDo you like Korea\'s culture?>>CorrectI listened to our conversation for a review.
>>CorrectI found some different pronunciation yesterday.
>>CorrectThese are difference that sound.>>These are different sounds.I have heard many compliment from other people.
>>CorrectBecause of my voice.
>>CorrectBut i heard my voice during reviewing.
>>But as I listened to my voice while reviewing..It\'s other voice.
>>It sounds like another person\'s voice
it\'s a little sad story like kid.>>It\'s a little sad kid like storyI hope and decide. >>CorrectI have to be calm down and try make practice more.
>>Correct
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