Nov. 2. 2011.

2011-11-02 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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It's on wednesday. What did you do yesterday? It's same days? Could you tell me about your students in evening class? I'm wondering that Korea people. Do you have a boyfriend? Is filipino or other nationality? When did your last boyfriend break up with you? The latest i became for about 7 mouths. What movies is your favorite since you have seen? What i know. Could you recommend America Movie,so i'll recommend some movies. If you had messenger, i can send some movies. I had alot of movies, Could you have Speaking Skill for Koean? Could you tell me some words? Do you like korea's culture? I listened our conversation to review. I found some different pronunciation yesterday. These are difference that sound. I have heard many compliment from other people. Because of my voice. But i heard my voice during reviewing. It's other voice. it's a little sad story like kid. I Hope and Decide. I have to be calm down and try to make practice more.

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Hi [이름],                 I think you did a great job in listening to our conversation. It will help you a lot. I\'m excited to talk to you to answer all your questions. see you in our class later. Please chack my corrections for you. Take care! -Verna- It\'s on wednesday. >>It\'s a Wednesday.What did you do yesterday?>>Correct It\'s same days? >>Is it the same day?Could you tell me about your students in evening class? >>CorrectI\'m wondering that Korea people. >>I\'m wondering about Korean people.Do you have a boyfriend? >>CorrectIs filipino or other nationality?>>Is he a filipino or other nationality?When did your last boyfriend break up with you? >>CorrectThe latest I became for about 7 mouths.>>The latest break up I had was about seven moths.What movies is your favorite since you have seen? >>What is your favorite movie?What i know.>>About what i know..Could you recommend America Movie, so i\'ll recommend some >>Could you recommend an American movie? So, I\'ll also recommend some movies.If you had messenger, I can send some movies. >>CorrectI had alot of movies,>>I watched a lot of movies.Could you have Speaking Skill for Koean?>>Do you have Korean speaking skill?Could you tell me some words?>>CorrectDo you like Korea\'s culture?>>CorrectI listened to our conversation for a review. >>CorrectI found some different pronunciation yesterday. >>CorrectThese are difference that sound.>>These are different sounds.I have heard many compliment from other people. >>CorrectBecause of my voice. >>CorrectBut i heard my voice during reviewing. >>But as I listened to my voice while reviewing..It\'s other voice. >>It sounds like another person\'s voice  it\'s a little sad story like kid.>>It\'s a little sad kid like storyI hope and decide. >>CorrectI have to be calm down and try make practice more. >>Correct

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