Nov. 2. 2011.
학생이 쓴 원문
Which books have you got respects in your life.
When i was in high school. i read Talmud.
Do you know Talmud?
Have you read the book?
when did you read?
The book is awesome book.
The book said,
Jew is Victim and always they had prejudice.
As these are saying,it starts.
Do you think about prejuidce?
Have you had prejuidce from something?
I always feel about prejudice in korea.
Why? Whcih prejuidce have you felt?
My nation only pursue money and authority.
For an example, when i was as middle student.
I didn't learn alphabet since after elementary school.
But middle english teacher taught since sentence.
It was to make matters worse.
My friend knew alphabet.
The class was over. i asked my friend.
When did you learn alphabet?
He said. i learned English academy.
I felt the most first prejudice.
We have affected alot of environments through Media or School life.
These are through affections.
We werer changed,Pursue individual values.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름],
You have chosen a very good topic to talk about today. We will discuss all of these in the class. Enjoy the midweek!
-Verna-
Which books have you got respects in your life.>> Which book influenced you in your life?
>> Which book do you respect in your life?When I was in high school I read Talmud.
>> CorrectDo you know Talmud?
>> CorrectHave you read the book?
>> CorrectWhen did you read it?>> CorrectThe book is awesome.
>> CorrectThe book said, Jew is Victim and always they had prejudice.
>> The book said Jews are alsways victims. The are always prejudiced.
As these are saying,it starts.>> As this saying starts..Do you think about prejudice?
>> CorrecHave you had prejuidce from something?>> Were you prejudiced for something?I always feel about prejudice in korea.
>> I always feel prejudiced in Korea.Why? Whcih prejudism have you felt?>> CorrectMy nation only pursue money and authority.
>> CorrectFor an example, when I was as middle student..
>> CorrectI didn\'t learn alphabet since after elementary school.
>> CorrectBut middle english teacher taught since sentence.>> But the middle school teache taught me to make sentence.
It was to make matters worse.
>> It made the matters worse.My friend knew thealphabet.>> CorrectThe class was over.
>> Correct
I asked my friend.
>> CorrectWhen did you learn the alphabet?>> CorrectHe said. i learned English academy.>> He said \"I learned it in the english Academy\"I felt the most first prejudice.
>> I felt the first prejudism.We have affected alot of environments through Media or School life.
>> We are affected a lot by the environment through media and social life.These are through affections.
>> CorrectWe werer changed,Pursue individual values.
>> We were changed. Pursue individual values.
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