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Hi, Razel You reminded me of my childhood on our phone class, today. At that time I was little so I couldn't judge whether the simple life was good or not. I just enjoyed the environment around my hometown. I was almost always with my friends. They are older or younger than me but nobody cares about that. There were no TV, movie theather and even small store in our village. To go the store, we had to walk out about 30 minutes. We didn't have enough money to buy cookie, candy and some bread. Even though we have the one nearer our place, we might save our pocket money because it was uncomfortable to use the store. We were not bored. We played a lot and swimmed each other in the stream without any clothes. We were also busy helping our family. Our parents were farmers so they needed our help to plant the farm. In Summer, we used to work in the field. Our face turned black but our eyes shined with children's innocence. Yes, we were happy then.--continue--

Hi there Miss [이름]. A pleasant Thursday ! Wow! It is really nice remembering our childhood years. Those memories when we get to spend more time with our families and friends are one of the best things that we really have to treasure. Wonderful, isn\'t\' it? Anyway, thank you for this composition. I can see that you really enjoyed those years:)   T. Razel   Here are some of the corrections:   Hi, Razel >>Hi, Razel!You reminded me of my childhood on our phone class, today. >>You reminded me of my childhood years during our phone class today. At that time I was little so I couldn\'t judge whether the simple life was good or not. >>At that time, I was young so I could not tell whether a simple life was good or not. I just enjoyed the environment around my hometown. >>CORRECTI was almost always with my friends. >>CORRECT They are older or younger than me but nobody cares about that. >>They were either older or younger than me but nobody cared about that. There were no TV, movie theather and even small store in our village. >>There were no TVs, movie theaters and even small stores in our village. To go the store, we had to walk out about 30 minutes. >>To get to the store, we had to walk for about 30 minutes. We didn\'t have enough money to buy cookie, candy and some bread. >>CORRECT    Even though we have the one nearer our place, we might save our pocket money because it was uncomfortable to use the store. >>Even though we had one which is nearer to our place, we saved our pocket money because it was uncomfortable to use the store. >>OR Even though we had one which is nearer to our place, we saved our pocket money because it was uncomfortable using the store.We were not bored. >>CORRECT We played a lot and swimmed each other in the stream without any clothes. >>We played a lot and swam in the stream without any clothes on. We were also busy helping our family. >>CORRECT Our parents were farmers so they needed our help to plant the farm. >>CORRECT In Summer, we used to work in the field. >>During summer, we used to work in the field. Our face turned black but our eyes shined with children\'s innocence. >>Our face turned black but our eyes shone with children\'s innocence. Yes, we were happy then. >>CORRECT --continue