Nov.20.2011.

2011-11-21 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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Hi Teacher Verna.Did you have a great weekend? What kind of Christmas gift did you buy for your mother? And did you buy something for your sibling?kk. I like to pay for everything. But Korea's culture have to pay money more from elder people. It's just Korea's culture. I always reviewed our class.it takes me about 50 minutes to understand it.But Nowaday,it takes me about 30 minutes. I told me already,i could hear ambulance sound sometimes from your call.And i heard other teacher the sound of laughter. It's the same pattern. Maybe a seat next you,the other Teacher is a very active person. I can understand your feelings. You have to handle many people so it's natural. Forgot about my imformation.if i were in your shoes. Have you ever tried internet shopping? Lara Teacher haven't tried it yet.Have you? I enjoy that. because it's convenient for men. If i go to Shopping center, i'm always incomfortable, Clerk is aggressive to sell their goods. And Their flattery is fear.

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Hello there [이름],          Thank you for your information. I had a great weekend with my family however, I just stayed there for an hour.  I\'m glad that you can feel that there is an improvement with your comprehenshion when listening to our class again. Let\'s talk more in our class. See you! -T.Verna-   Hi Teacher Verna! Did you have a great weekend? >>CorrectWhat kind of Christmas gift did you buy for your mother? >>CorrectAnd did you buy something for your sibling?kk. >>CorrectI like to pay for everything. >>CorrectBut Korea\'s culture have to pay money more from elder people. >>But in Korea\'s culture erlfer people have to pay more money.It\'s just Korea\'s culture. >>CorrectI always reviewed our class.it takes me about 50 minutes to understand it.But Nowaday,it takes me about 30 minutes. >>I always reviewed our class. Itakes about 50 minutes to understand it. But nowadays it anly takes 30 minutes.I told me already,i could hear ambulance sound sometimes from your call. >>I told you already  that I could hear the sound of ambulance from your call. And i heard other teacher the sound of laughter. >>And I could also hear a sound of laughter from other teacher.It\'s the same pattern. >>CorrectMaybe a seat next you,the other Teacher is a very active person.>>Maybe, the person who seats next to you is a very active. I can understand your feelings. >>CorrectYou have to handle many people so it\'s natural. >>CorrectForgot about my imformation.if i were in your shoes. >>Just forget about what I told you, if I were on your shoes.Have you ever tried internet shopping?>>Correct Lara Teacher haven\'t tried it yet.Have you? >>Teacher Lara haven\'t tried it yet, have yet?I enjoy that. because it\'s convenient for men. >>I enjoy that because it\'s convenient for men.If i go to Shopping center, i\'m always incomfortable, >>If I go to shopping center, I always feel uncomfortable.The clerk is aggressive to sell their goods. >>CorrectAnd Their flattery is fear. >>And their flattery is fearful.

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