Nov.20.2011.

2011-11-21 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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Hi Teacher Lara. I have watched alot of movies this year. If i recommend you in Korea Movie. The best Movie is The FrontLine. The Movie describe Korea War. Main actors are Go-su and Sin Ha Gyun. The Moive won the best picture this year in Korea. If you were bothered my lips, Just ignore. I don't know filipino's life style. You can be unpleasant my opinion that's because of personal questions. But I wondered a long time ago. My friend who an American told me, They don't ask these questions.becuase they just live for enjoying. They don't like serious questions. he said. However it's the best question.when we talk. We use all Korean so I didn't increase my English Language. Nowadays,I try to use English But it's not used to speak the Language. As far as I've felt so generous during talking. I told you on Friday. Demian. It won't be famous book in your country. I'm sorry for asking some weird requirement. And You're hard to handle many people. See you Tomorrow.

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Hi there again [이름]!!!  You don\'t need to apologize about asking personal questions. I like answering your questions anyway. Just don\'t hesitate, if you want to know more about me then feel-free to ask. Kk. Take care and talk to you soon then.   Hi Teacher Lara. >> CorrectI have watched alot of movies this year. >> CorrectIf i recommend you in Korea Movie. The best Movie is The FrontLine. >> If I recommend you a Korean movie that you should watch, the best movie is The Frontline. The Movie describe Korea War. >> The movie describes the Korean war.Main actors are Go-su and Sin Ha Gyun. >> CorrectThe Moive won the best picture this year in Korea. >> The movie won the best picture this year in Korea.If you were bothered my lips, Just ignore >> If you were botheres by my mouth, just ignore it.I don\'t know filipino\'s life style. >> I don\'t know Filipino\'s lifestyle.You can be unpleasant my opinion that\'s because of personal questions. >> You can feel unpleasant about my opinion that\'s because of my personal questions.But I wondered a long time ago. >> CorrectMy friend who an American told me, They don\'t ask these questions.becuase they just live for enjoying. >> My friend who is an American told me, they don\'t ask these questions because they just enjoy life.They don\'t like serious questions, he said. >> CorrectHowever it\'s the best question.when we talk. >> However, it\'s the best question whenever we talk.We use all Korean so I didn\'t increase my English Language. >> We always use Korean language so I couldn\'t increase me English speaking skill.Nowadays,I try to use English But it\'s not used to speak the Language. >> Nowadays, I try to use English but not entirely in speaking the language.As far as I\'ve felt so generous during talking. >> As far as I\'ve felt generous during our conversation.I told you on Friday. Demian. >> I told you last Friday the book about Demian.It won\'t be famous book in your country. >> I was not a famous book in your country.I\'m sorry for asking some weird requirement. >> I\'m sorry for asking some weird questions.And You\'re hard to handle many people. >> And I know you\'re having a hard handling many people.See you Tomorrow. >> See you tomorrow.

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