Nov.20.2011.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Teacher Verna.
What did you do in your hometown?
You told me on Friday.
It takes Seven hours to get there.
It's a big work.
Why did you go there? Have you had some celebrations?
Anyway,Let's tell this story tomorrow.
I searched prosecutor princess through internet.
The soup opera aired last year.
I served for Military at that time. maybe i didn't know about that.
Kim-So-Yun is a little famous actress in Korea.
Course I Know her.
When will you have Children?
I love children. but it'll cost alot money to grow However we'll be happy.
You told me before.
You want to have one son and one daughter.
It's a very simple Nuclear family.
I'm sorry for Just telling you.
If you felt a little bothered, i hope don't care about my lips.
Because I don't know your circumstance.
I meant don't exist another meaning and it's not thoughtless for saying it.
Let's cheer up. it's happy Monday.
Effort don't betray.I always believe and I love the letter.
It's my motto. See you around.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름],
Wow! I think you are improving in every aspects of your English skill. I can see that you sentences are getting better. I had a great time during the weekend with my family. I traveled for 14 hours but I only stayed there for 1 hour. I\'ll tell you more later. Happy Monday!
-Verna-
Hi Teacher Verna.
>>CorrectWhat did you do in your hometown?
>>CorrectYou told me on Friday.
>>CorrectIt takes seven hours to get there.
>>CorrectIt\'s a big work.
>>CorrectWhy did you go there?
>>Correct
Have you had some celebrations?
>>CorrectAnyway,Let\'s tell this story tomorrow.
>>Anyway, let\'s talk about this story tomorrow.I searched prosecutor princess through the internet.
>>CorrectThe soup opera aired last year.>>The soap opera was aired last year.
I served for Military at that time. maybe i didn\'t know about that.
>>I was serving in the military at that time. Maybe I didn\'t know about that.Kim-So-Yun is a little famous actress in Korea.
>>CorrectCourse I Know her.
>>But of course I know her.When will you have children?
>>CorrectI love children.
>>Correct
but it\'ll cost alot money to grow However we\'ll be happy.
>>It\'ll cost a lot of money to raise them however we\'ll be happy.You told me before.
>>CorrectYou want to have one son and one daughter.
>>CorrectIt\'s a very simple nuclear family.
>>CorrectI\'m sorry for just telling you.
>>CorrectIf you felt a little bothered, i hope don\'t care about my lips.
>>If you felt a little bothered, I hope you fon\'t care about what I say.Because I don\'t know your circumstance.
>>CorrectI meant don\'t exist another meaning and it\'s not thoughtless for saying it.
>>I don\'t have any other meaning, and it\'s not thoughtless to say it.Let\'s cheer up. it\'s a happy Monday.
>>CorrectEffort don\'t betray.
>>Efforts are not betrayed.
>> Efforts are not wasted. (Is this what you mean?)
I always believe and I love the letter.
>>I always believe and love this saying.It\'s my motto. See you around.
>>Correct
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