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2011-11-21 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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Hi Teacher Verna. What did you do in your hometown? You told me on Friday. It takes Seven hours to get there. It's a big work. Why did you go there? Have you had some celebrations? Anyway,Let's tell this story tomorrow. I searched prosecutor princess through internet. The soup opera aired last year. I served for Military at that time. maybe i didn't know about that. Kim-So-Yun is a little famous actress in Korea. Course I Know her. When will you have Children? I love children. but it'll cost alot money to grow However we'll be happy. You told me before. You want to have one son and one daughter. It's a very simple Nuclear family. I'm sorry for Just telling you. If you felt a little bothered, i hope don't care about my lips. Because I don't know your circumstance. I meant don't exist another meaning and it's not thoughtless for saying it. Let's cheer up. it's happy Monday. Effort don't betray.I always believe and I love the letter. It's my motto. See you around.

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Hello there [이름],                 Wow! I think you are improving in every aspects of your English skill. I can see that you sentences are getting better. I had a great time during the weekend with my family. I traveled for 14 hours but I only stayed there for 1 hour. I\'ll tell you more later. Happy Monday! -Verna- Hi Teacher Verna. >>CorrectWhat did you do in your hometown? >>CorrectYou told me on Friday. >>CorrectIt takes seven hours to get there. >>CorrectIt\'s a big work. >>CorrectWhy did you go there? >>Correct  Have you had some celebrations? >>CorrectAnyway,Let\'s tell this story tomorrow. >>Anyway, let\'s talk about this story tomorrow.I searched prosecutor princess through the internet. >>CorrectThe soup opera aired last year.>>The soap opera was aired  last year. I served for Military at that time. maybe i didn\'t know about that. >>I was serving in the military at that time. Maybe I didn\'t know about that.Kim-So-Yun is a little famous actress in Korea. >>CorrectCourse I Know her. >>But of course I know her.When will you have children? >>CorrectI love children. >>Correct  but it\'ll cost alot money to grow However we\'ll be happy. >>It\'ll cost a lot of money to raise them however we\'ll be happy.You told me before. >>CorrectYou want to have one son and one daughter. >>CorrectIt\'s a very simple nuclear family. >>CorrectI\'m sorry for just telling you. >>CorrectIf you felt a little bothered, i hope don\'t care about my lips. >>If you felt a little bothered, I hope you fon\'t care about what I say.Because I don\'t know your circumstance. >>CorrectI meant don\'t exist another meaning and it\'s not thoughtless for saying it. >>I don\'t have any other meaning, and it\'s not thoughtless to say it.Let\'s cheer up. it\'s a happy Monday. >>CorrectEffort don\'t betray. >>Efforts are not betrayed. >> Efforts are not wasted. (Is this what you mean?) I always believe and I love the letter. >>I always believe and love this saying.It\'s my motto. See you around. >>Correct

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